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Megatokyo Forums > Story Discussions > Haiku [0844] Damaged but not broken


Posted by: Mae Apr 10 2006, 04:02 PM
She confronts her foe
Unbroken and unafraid
Watching as he nears

He confronts his foe
Sword in hand but does not strike
His purpose changes

Posted by: Kaleo52 Apr 10 2006, 08:22 PM
It works...jolly good job...I'll comend you.

Posted by: Shoka Apr 10 2006, 09:40 PM
QUOTE (Mae)
He confronts his foe
Sword in hand but does not strike
His purpose changes

a sword raised, a sword lowered:
the diamond edge of restraint.


[irish_haiku]
When Piroko was weakened and damaged,
And Largo had gained the advantage,
To strike or to shoot
Someone so bloody cute,
Was more than that soldier could manage. happy.gif
[/irish_haiku]

Posted by: littlethunder Apr 10 2006, 10:06 PM

her glory vanished
his might drained, survivors meet
to make common cause


LittleThunder

[!haiku] Kaleo52, please. This is a haiku thread. [/!haiku]

Posted by: Mintaka Apr 11 2006, 10:53 PM
QUOTE
 
her glory vanished
his might drained, survivors meet
to make common cause


While there's life, there's hope to win
Justice or vengeance. March on.

Posted by: NekuraEtowaru Apr 11 2006, 11:01 PM
Gone on fickle winds
Cruel fate crushed all before it
Hope stays resilient

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