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Megatokyo Forums > Story Discussions > Haiku [816] Unexpected Help

Posted by: NekuraEtowaru Feb 1 2006, 01:20 PM
Genuine concern
Lurking in shadows of doubt
A decision looms

Posted by: Elite Owl Feb 1 2006, 07:28 PM
Incoming message.
Returning a bag feels right.
Leg pain emerges.

Posted by: Mae Feb 1 2006, 08:41 PM
Her faltering steps
As she ventures out alone
Call them to her aid.

Posted by: NekuraEtowaru Feb 1 2006, 10:15 PM
Frailty thwarts intent
He who hesitates is lost
Waits to try again

Posted by: AllanO Feb 1 2006, 10:17 PM
He sees her falter.
No, to late to help her up.
Another helps first.

Edit: fix my syllable count.

Posted by: JRandomLurker Feb 2 2006, 01:18 AM
a watcher
must keep his distance;
approach is
only given when
his star is falling

Posted by: Negima Feb 2 2006, 03:51 AM
Catch a glimpse of her
Will she notice me today?
Boy in the Background

Posted by: NekuraEtowaru Feb 2 2006, 09:07 PM
Admires from afar
A missed opportunity
Failure of timing

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