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Posted by: NekuraEtowaru Jan 27 2006, 04:15 PM
Respect? Obsession?
For some there is no diff'rence
Shaking the cage bars

Posted by: Elite Owl Jan 27 2006, 04:25 PM
A Hurricane of
thoughts swirling around. No one
knows where comfort went.

Aside: Am I allowed to carry over the rest of a sentence into the next line? That's the way I usually make a Haiku...but I never knew if I was doing it wrong this whole time. huh.gif

Posted by: Dog Soldier Jan 27 2006, 04:26 PM
Obsession? Regret?
My life is no longer my own.
The tables have turned

Posted by: Shadowy Intent Jan 27 2006, 04:45 PM
Behold your new world--
Far below, the surging crowd
And here, loneliness.

Posted by: metris Jan 27 2006, 04:48 PM
QUOTE (NekuraEtowaru @ Jan 27 2006, 04:15 PM)
Respect? Obsession?
For some there is no diff'rence
Shaking the cage's bars

Wow, this one was really nice.


Sadness.
Anger.
Were foreign.

Posted by: NekuraEtowaru Jan 27 2006, 08:26 PM
QUOTE (metris @ Jan 27 2006, 02:48 PM)
QUOTE (NekuraEtowaru)

Respect? Obsession?
For some there is no diff'rence
Shaking the cage's bars


Wow, this one was really nice.


Sadness.
Anger.
Were foreign.

Ack! I miscounted! *pout* Oh well I fixed it in the original...thanks though...I try to bring my A game smile.gif

@Elite I'm too lazy to try and enforce rules...post what you feel...
this is a "haiku" thread but there is usually all sorts and forms of poetry in these
threads.

Her naivete
Harboring a deadly trust
Dragons hiding near

Nekura

Posted by: Babblefish Jan 27 2006, 08:47 PM
The past echoes soft
The fear of obsession haunts
Defiant hope stays

First one.

Posted by: Small Pink Mouse Jan 28 2006, 12:10 AM
Star's bargain was made.
Fans honor their side of it.
Actress, honor yours!

Posted by: littlethunder Jan 28 2006, 03:55 AM

pedestal life means
lonely in crowded office
kuma posts more pics


LittleThunder

Posted by: NekuraEtowaru Jan 28 2006, 10:47 PM
The pedestal sways
No safety, no comfort here
A long way to fall

Posted by: Mae Jan 29 2006, 08:31 PM
Pity? Arrogance?
I know what they are thinking
But they can't know me.

Posted by: NekuraEtowaru Jan 29 2006, 11:19 PM
From under the door
Reaching through prying signals
We, the enemy

Posted by: Negima Jan 29 2006, 11:40 PM
Connected feelings...
Do they become happy now
Thinking I am too?


Don't usually do this but thought I could give it a try...

Posted by: NekuraEtowaru Jan 29 2006, 11:43 PM
QUOTE (Negima @ Jan 29 2006, 09:40 PM)
Connected feelings...
Do they become happy now
Thinking I am too?


Don't usually do this but thought I could give it a try...

Dude, that was SWEET! I likey! Don't be a stranger, eh?

Nekura

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