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|Posted by: NekuraEtowaru Jan 27 2006, 04:15 PM|
| Respect? Obsession?
For some there is no diff'rence
Shaking the cage bars
|Posted by: Elite Owl Jan 27 2006, 04:25 PM|
| A Hurricane of
thoughts swirling around. No one
knows where comfort went.
Aside: Am I allowed to carry over the rest of a sentence into the next line? That's the way I usually make a Haiku...but I never knew if I was doing it wrong this whole time.
|Posted by: Dog Soldier Jan 27 2006, 04:26 PM|
| Obsession? Regret?
My life is no longer my own.
The tables have turned
|Posted by: Shadowy Intent Jan 27 2006, 04:45 PM|
| Behold your new world--
Far below, the surging crowd
And here, loneliness.
|Posted by: metris Jan 27 2006, 04:48 PM|
Wow, this one was really nice.
|Posted by: NekuraEtowaru Jan 27 2006, 08:26 PM|
Ack! I miscounted! *pout* Oh well I fixed it in the original...thanks though...I try to bring my A game
@Elite I'm too lazy to try and enforce rules...post what you feel...
this is a "haiku" thread but there is usually all sorts and forms of poetry in these
Harboring a deadly trust
Dragons hiding near
|Posted by: Babblefish Jan 27 2006, 08:47 PM|
| The past echoes soft
The fear of obsession haunts
Defiant hope stays
|Posted by: Small Pink Mouse Jan 28 2006, 12:10 AM|
| Star's bargain was made.
Fans honor their side of it.
Actress, honor yours!
|Posted by: littlethunder Jan 28 2006, 03:55 AM|
pedestal life means
lonely in crowded office
kuma posts more pics
|Posted by: NekuraEtowaru Jan 28 2006, 10:47 PM|
| The pedestal sways
No safety, no comfort here
A long way to fall
|Posted by: Mae Jan 29 2006, 08:31 PM|
| Pity? Arrogance?
I know what they are thinking
But they can't know me.
|Posted by: NekuraEtowaru Jan 29 2006, 11:19 PM|
| From under the door
Reaching through prying signals
We, the enemy
|Posted by: Negima Jan 29 2006, 11:40 PM|
| Connected feelings...
Do they become happy now
Thinking I am too?
Don't usually do this but thought I could give it a try...
|Posted by: NekuraEtowaru Jan 29 2006, 11:43 PM|
Dude, that was SWEET! I likey! Don't be a stranger, eh?