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Megatokyo Forums > Story Discussions > Haiku [796] Saving and Reloading

Posted by: NekuraEtowaru Dec 12 2005, 02:30 PM
Cloud bursts, poison spreads
Ill winds carry destruction
Chaos in motion

Posted by: WyndhamHeart Dec 12 2005, 02:44 PM
Yuki the hero
Saving her without a thought
Too bad Dad is here

Posted by: Temenus Dec 12 2005, 02:45 PM
Trails of ribbon lost
points toward injured saviour
inscrutable look

/Temenus, who should not be needlessly messianic...

Posted by: NekuraEtowaru Dec 12 2005, 10:15 PM
Stunned, serene, injured
A torrent of emotions
Chaos in balance?

Posted by: Mae Dec 12 2005, 11:51 PM
He shows just in time
For a good look at the mess
A father's talent.

Posted by: bulmabriefs144 Dec 13 2005, 12:15 AM
Driving straight upwards
Approaching the high sanctum
banish outlanders

Posted by: Shoka Dec 13 2005, 12:53 AM

While Yuki's brave act wins a point,
She will need some Ben-Gay to anoint
This intense ankle sprain,
And then somehow explain
To her Dad why she's stuck in this joint.


Posted by: alex16384 Dec 13 2005, 06:49 AM
My dearest daughter
What did I just see you do?
And who's the gaijin?

Posted by: NekuraEtowaru Dec 13 2005, 03:54 PM
Sacrifice has costs
Aiding hated enemies
Untold suffering

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