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Posted by: NekuraEtowaru Nov 30 2005, 03:06 AM
A barrier falls
His liege will accept his help
Progress in small steps

Posted by: InfiniteMiller Nov 30 2005, 01:48 PM
Her resignation
Allows carte blanche for chaos
He grins, now restored.

Posted by: NekuraEtowaru Nov 30 2005, 02:29 PM
First, do them no harm
Her submission his reward
Renewed in spirit

Posted by: SeraphicNinja Nov 30 2005, 02:42 PM
Grudging submission
An unsuspecting crowd waits
The grin says it all

Posted by: Mae Nov 30 2005, 10:09 PM
A glance under bangs
And finally she consents
An alliance forged

Posted by: Curse of Hubris Nov 30 2005, 11:42 PM
[!Haiku]...I've mulled over this comic for close to twelve hours now, and I cannot come up with anything in standard haiku form that I am happy with. I've really been enjoying Nekura's medieval allegory, and wanted to find a way to incorporate that as well. I finally decided to go with a rhyming quatrain.[/!Haiku]

[Quatrain/Erika]
There he stands, a shining knight
Asking my leave to remove my plight
And deep in my broken heart just might
Hope be returning, with warmth-giving light.
[/Quatrain]

Posted by: NekuraEtowaru Dec 1 2005, 12:54 AM
Give me your hand, friend
That I may guide you through this
I ask for no more

Posted by: littlethunder Dec 1 2005, 01:04 PM

compass, spin no more
here is thy potent lodestone
now steer ye True East



(companion to http://forums.megatokyo.com/index.php?showtopic=1702838&view=findpost&p=3918193)

LittleThunder

Posted by: Refugee Dec 1 2005, 02:24 PM
The thorny rose bows
To soothing poison ivy.
Entwined, they triumph.

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