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Megatokyo Forums > Story Discussions > Haiku [788] Astonishing Ineptitude

Posted by: NekuraEtowaru Nov 21 2005, 04:23 PM
Constrictor caress
Coils stealing breath, tightening
A dark fog descends

Posted by: Curse of Hubris Nov 21 2005, 04:38 PM
Two cats poised for battle
Kindness causes distraction
Lurker plays trump card?

Bitter, lonely one
Is there nothing but hate left
In your broken-heart?

Posted by: NekuraEtowaru Nov 21 2005, 06:14 PM
The scent of carnage
Blood of the incautious shed
Demons are revealed

Posted by: Shadowy Intent Nov 21 2005, 06:59 PM
Still mute, mannequin?
What allegiance keeps you a
Silent plastic toy?

Posted by: Navaruk Nov 21 2005, 08:07 PM
She can smell your fear
Bearing her fangs for the kill
This is a wolf’s game

Posted by: NekuraEtowaru Nov 21 2005, 09:42 PM
Sting of her failure
The scorpion finds it's mark
Fighting small battles

Posted by: Curse of Hubris Nov 21 2005, 10:03 PM
A grief-blind outcry
Or all according to plan,
Dark machinator?

Posted by: Rapierman Nov 21 2005, 11:13 PM
Scorned woman's fury
now turns to interloper,
going for a kill.

Posted by: uberlegen Nov 21 2005, 11:27 PM
Whispered drops not heard
All is focused on dark waves
Trying to swell up.

Posted by: Shoka Nov 21 2005, 11:34 PM

That you want Piro's heart, I am told;
It's too slimy for you, but I'm sold!
'Cuz I'd fry it with rice,
Then serve it on ice,
For revenge is a dish best served cold.


Posted by: uberlegen Nov 21 2005, 11:36 PM
Don't know about you,
But I tire of Miho
Using monologues.

Will someone use common sense
And slap her across the face?

[!haiku] Not really poetic, but it's true. [/!haiku]

Posted by: Laureola Nov 22 2005, 12:48 AM
Ruin, ever oblique,
Stands between two darkened means
Nike to the adroit.


Posted by: Temenus Nov 22 2005, 07:55 AM
Snarling beast unleashed
Ignorance of prey confirmed
Moves in for the kill

/Temenus, who still loves Miho, no matter what she does…

Posted by: NekuraEtowaru Nov 22 2005, 08:15 AM
Duelers circle
Searching for obscured weakness
Onlookers amazed

Posted by: Mae Nov 22 2005, 05:31 PM
A man's heart is not
a hard thing to grasp, the trick
is in keeping it.

Posted by: NekuraEtowaru Nov 22 2005, 05:41 PM
Eris ascendant
Sowing discord where she may
In suff'ring's service

Posted by: Small Pink Mouse Nov 22 2005, 10:38 PM
Cobra speech is like
Cobra poison. So spake Kaa
In Kipling's poems.

Miho's words strike with
fanged quickness and venom. Can
Yuki play mongoose?

Posted by: NekuraEtowaru Nov 23 2005, 12:40 PM
The battle is joined
The gauntlet fallen to earth
Challenger flounders

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