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|Posted by: NekuraEtowaru Nov 21 2005, 04:23 PM|
| Constrictor caress
Coils stealing breath, tightening
A dark fog descends
|Posted by: Curse of Hubris Nov 21 2005, 04:38 PM|
| Two cats poised for battle
Kindness causes distraction
Lurker plays trump card?
Bitter, lonely one
Is there nothing but hate left
In your broken-heart?
|Posted by: NekuraEtowaru Nov 21 2005, 06:14 PM|
| The scent of carnage
Blood of the incautious shed
Demons are revealed
|Posted by: Shadowy Intent Nov 21 2005, 06:59 PM|
| Still mute, mannequin?
What allegiance keeps you a
Silent plastic toy?
|Posted by: Navaruk Nov 21 2005, 08:07 PM|
| She can smell your fear
Bearing her fangs for the kill
This is a wolf’s game
|Posted by: NekuraEtowaru Nov 21 2005, 09:42 PM|
| Sting of her failure
The scorpion finds it's mark
Fighting small battles
|Posted by: Curse of Hubris Nov 21 2005, 10:03 PM|
| A grief-blind outcry
Or all according to plan,
|Posted by: Rapierman Nov 21 2005, 11:13 PM|
| Scorned woman's fury
now turns to interloper,
going for a kill.
|Posted by: uberlegen Nov 21 2005, 11:27 PM|
| Whispered drops not heard
All is focused on dark waves
Trying to swell up.
|Posted by: Shoka Nov 21 2005, 11:34 PM|
That you want Piro's heart, I am told;
It's too slimy for you, but I'm sold!
'Cuz I'd fry it with rice,
Then serve it on ice,
For revenge is a dish best served cold.
|Posted by: uberlegen Nov 21 2005, 11:36 PM|
| Don't know about you,
But I tire of Miho
Will someone use common sense
And slap her across the face?
[!haiku] Not really poetic, but it's true. [/!haiku]
|Posted by: Laureola Nov 22 2005, 12:48 AM|
| Ruin, ever oblique,
Stands between two darkened means
Nike to the adroit.
|Posted by: Temenus Nov 22 2005, 07:55 AM|
| Snarling beast unleashed
Ignorance of prey confirmed
Moves in for the kill
/Temenus, who still loves Miho, no matter what she does…
|Posted by: NekuraEtowaru Nov 22 2005, 08:15 AM|
| Duelers circle
Searching for obscured weakness
|Posted by: Mae Nov 22 2005, 05:31 PM|
| A man's heart is not
a hard thing to grasp, the trick
is in keeping it.
|Posted by: NekuraEtowaru Nov 22 2005, 05:41 PM|
| Eris ascendant
Sowing discord where she may
In suff'ring's service
|Posted by: Small Pink Mouse Nov 22 2005, 10:38 PM|
| Cobra speech is like
Cobra poison. So spake Kaa
In Kipling's poems.
Miho's words strike with
fanged quickness and venom. Can
Yuki play mongoose?
|Posted by: NekuraEtowaru Nov 23 2005, 12:40 PM|
| The battle is joined
The gauntlet fallen to earth