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Megatokyo Forums > Story Discussions > Haiku [787] Pristine, Angelic White


Posted by: NekuraEtowaru Nov 18 2005, 07:50 AM
Illusion shattered
Pieces reflecting false light
No respect, no love

Father forgive them
They do know what they're doing
They no longer care

Posted by: Curse of Hubris Nov 18 2005, 08:12 AM
A harsh reality
All too much to handle now
Is there no escape?

Posted by: Toteone Nov 18 2005, 08:23 AM
awww c'mon, what about some haikus about how pretty, angelic white it is? All from the view of miss Kimiko... hmpff.
Okiez:

Pristine angelic white
beautifoul enough to die for
hope that she can be mine

Posted by: UserGoogol Nov 18 2005, 08:31 AM
You see the upskirt?
It's pristine angelic white
with a cute pink bow

At Anna Millers,
Come see the pretty idol
I'm sure she won't mind.

Otaku are great
Whether you want it or not
You will get their love

Otaku aren't tough.
A small puppy could kill them.
But watch out for swarms.

Posted by: Andrusi Nov 18 2005, 08:31 AM
Kimiko's fanboys
Justifying their stalking?
They think she'll approve!

"Super-Kimiko,
Saving fanboys from distress!
And with panty shots!"

Eight megapixels
Let them see her underwear.
White with a pink bow.

"Did you get all that?
See how crazy these fanboys...
...Kimiko? You there?"

Posted by: NekuraEtowaru Nov 18 2005, 09:37 AM
QUOTE (MakenXsoul @ Nov 18 2005, 06:51 AM)
Haha no wonder Fred had to change the script up to get what they're saying just right. That was brillant. But yeah now Kimiko knows she's in some stuff. By the way. They're talking about last night with her helping Piro and Largo? If that's true. That means they've been watched for a while. And Junpei was dealing with Yuki's mother at that time. So perhaps we'll see Junpei pretty soon again, because he was keeping things under control when Largo told him so.

[!Haiku]Hi! Welcome to MT Forums! Discussion of the strip goes in the MDT, which can be found http://forums.megatokyo.com/index.php?showtopic=1706626. This is a thread for fanworks in haiku/limerick/anything goes form related to the strip[/!Haiku]

Flip over the log
Rotten underside exposed
This destructive love

Posted by: Curse of Hubris Nov 18 2005, 10:47 AM
[!Haiku] Limerick? Are you serious? We can do limericks? I had no idea. [/!Haiku]

There once was a girl named Kimiko
Who was the star voice in a porno
Game, and now fanboys stare
At her white underwear
How now will you rescue her, Piro?

Posted by: NekuraEtowaru Nov 18 2005, 10:53 AM
QUOTE (Curse of Hubris @ Nov 18 2005, 08:47 AM)
[!Haiku] Limerick? Are you serious? We can do limericks? I had no idea. [/!Haiku]

There once was a girl named Kimiko
Who was the star voice in a porno
Game, and now fanboys stare
At her white underwear
How now will you rescue her, Piro?

[!Haiku] Oh yes...some jokingly tag them as [Irish_haiku], but they are still fine to post here. [/!Haiku]

Prying eyes invade
No care for the affected
She isn't human

Posted by: Dark Morford Nov 18 2005, 01:20 PM
So many new fans;
Who knows what they'll find out next?
Angels need space, too.

Posted by: Rapierman Nov 18 2005, 01:22 PM
The price of stardom
is a loss of privacy
crossing to dark sides.

In the crush of fans,
a mind strains to breaking points
near the precipice.

Posted by: Curse of Hubris Nov 18 2005, 02:00 PM
Innocence taken
Fans now show their true colors
How can she hide now?

Posted by: Samurai Drifter Nov 18 2005, 02:11 PM
Really creepy fans
It's too late to get away
I'll see you at work.

wink.gif

Posted by: Kage Nov 18 2005, 03:43 PM
Creepy fanboy who stalks through the night
Lay down and stared up at the light
He saw pantyhose
Then her foot broke his nose
What he uploaded after was white.

The Lap Pour Special
Will be served to otaku
No more coffee left

Posted by: SquirrelBeast Nov 18 2005, 04:11 PM
i think kimiko kinda asked for it when she publicly said she felt sorry for all the nerds out there...

Posted by: UserGoogol Nov 18 2005, 05:33 PM
Lolol, Internet
Zomg teh Kimiko
Kekeke, geek rush

Posted by: NekuraEtowaru Nov 18 2005, 06:34 PM
Blinded by the white
Pushing bounds of decency
Threatening worship

Posted by: NightStrife Nov 18 2005, 06:38 PM
[waltz haiku]

"Leveling, sharpening!"
New idol Kimiko
Listens to tales of what
Sits 'tween her thighs.

Panning t'ward gallows now,
Oh-doe-ko-ee-lee-us
Headlight snare contrasts the
Fan with no eyes.

[/waltz haiku]

[!haiku] Yes, I realize Odocoileus is probably not pronounced the way I used it above, but it was too perfect to not do. [/!haiku]

Posted by: codepoetica Nov 19 2005, 09:09 PM
white whisps obscure her
purest chasam: shroud no fan
is worthy to part

eight megapixel
photography shan't capture
its timeless beauty

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