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Posted by: Mae Nov 8 2005, 12:22 PM
Hopelessly entwined
Private and public faces
The masks slip and mix



Posted by: VRMaster Nov 8 2005, 12:34 PM
Jeers create tension
Chaos beneath the surface
Danger from all sides

Posted by: AncestralHamster Nov 8 2005, 12:48 PM
Energies building,
Storms growing on many fronts:
Where will it first break?

Arsonist at play
Scattering sparks o'er kindling,
Heedless of the harm.

QUOTE (Mae @ Nov 8 2005, 11:22 AM)
Hopelessly entwined
Private and public faces
The masks slip and mix

Makeup is easily fixed,
Not so tangled emotions.

Posted by: NekuraEtowaru Nov 8 2005, 01:02 PM
The serpent strikes true
Chinks in her armor exposed
Poison spreads slowly

Posted by: EternalTorment Nov 8 2005, 03:54 PM
The Spirit is hurt
The mind is broken and blue
a remedy sought

A shadowy future
the storm risen, and now seeking
what will come of it?

Posted by: |\/|3647|20& Nov 8 2005, 04:03 PM
Erika's odd face,
is very funny to me,
Dom rocks all out socks

Posted by: NekuraEtowaru Nov 8 2005, 07:01 PM
Fierce storm incoming
Tiny dancer on the edge
Here there is no net

Posted by: Navaruk Nov 8 2005, 07:46 PM
QUOTE (NekuraEtowaru @ Nov 8 2005, 07:01 PM)
Fierce storm incoming
Tiny dancer on the edge
Here there is no net

To part the raging chaos
And rebuke the sea of tears

The sweet crimson taste
Whispers in the lost one’s ear
Of the truth in sin

Posted by: nephilim2 Nov 8 2005, 08:50 PM
wow if i were to have my head ripped off and thrown into a crowd for a distraction...
i would want a good spray pattern too... so my blood can reform my vampire-esque inner... whoa got carried away

the scene isn't looking as frantic as it couldv'e been and it's being chopped up more so the scene which should be chaos is much more slow which in turn causes a more calm effect... something big should happen soon...actually i think something big WILL happen...

and that is dom right...if it is he is a robot android thing right... or am i mistaken for some other comic...

())crayola))>~~~~~~~~~power

Posted by: VRMaster Nov 8 2005, 09:01 PM
QUOTE (nephilim2 @ Nov 8 2005, 08:50 PM)
wow if i were to have my head ripped off and thrown into a crowd for a distraction...
i would want a good spray pattern too... so my blood can reform my vampire-esque inner... whoa got carried away

the scene isn't looking as frantic as it couldv'e been and it's being chopped up more so the scene which should be chaos is much more slow which in turn causes a more calm effect... something big should happen soon...actually i think something big WILL happen...

and that is dom right...if it is he is a robot android thing right... or am i mistaken for some other comic...

())crayola))>~~~~~~~~~power

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Posted by: NekuraEtowaru Nov 8 2005, 10:25 PM
Candy from strangers
Must never be accepted
Danger in the air

Posted by: nephilim2 Nov 9 2005, 12:30 PM
oh crap sorry guys i forgot stuff im an idiot bakabaka baka baka baka baka me

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