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Posted by: AncestralHamster Oct 12 2005, 02:23 AM
Winter's grip relents.
From frozen earth new life grows,
Warmed by the sun's rays.

Posted by: Rapierman Oct 12 2005, 02:31 AM
The phoenix rises
once again from the ashes.
The fire burns anew.

Posted by: Navaruk Oct 12 2005, 02:56 AM
Skillful Memory
Resetting the game again
Now press continue

Posted by: Shoka Oct 12 2005, 03:20 AM
largo's blade flashes,
for he knows rule number one:
always cut the cards.

[irish_haiku]
When Largo pwned Junko with ease,
The l33t d00d was secretly pleased;
He suggested a newer
Strategic maneuver,
That would bring sensei down to his knees.
[/irish_haiku]

Posted by: Shizuruu Oct 12 2005, 06:40 PM
Fight will continue
Largo's strong spirit rises
Pheonix Move follows

Posted by: NekuraEtowaru Oct 12 2005, 06:50 PM
Resurrection comes
The fox finds his way again
Unfased by turmoil

Posted by: TheGreatHibiki Oct 12 2005, 07:00 PM
He awakens now
The monster inside his soul
Anger turned the tide


Non Haiku:
It has been a while hasn't it?

Posted by: NekuraEtowaru Oct 12 2005, 07:12 PM
The snake is silent
Patient, it waits for its time
He's revealed through her

Posted by: HomunculusGlory Oct 12 2005, 07:21 PM
The heavenly skill
Rises form the deep once more
To finish the foe


That's my first Hiaku...um...ever...I think I did somehting wrong

Posted by: NekuraEtowaru Oct 12 2005, 07:26 PM
QUOTE (HomunculusGlory @ Oct 12 2005, 06:21 PM)
The heavenly skill
Rises form the deep once more
To finish the foe


That's my first Hiaku...um...ever...I think I did somehting wrong

[!Haiku] got the 5-7-5 part right, and didn't just summarize the strip...got a reference to nature in there...and that isnt even a must-have item...good job for a first attempt! PS: Brackets like the ones around what I'm saying here are used to indicate it isnt a haiku or (or renga in the renga thread)...you don't need them otherwise, FYI[/!Haiku]

Nekura

Posted by: waerloga Oct 12 2005, 07:36 PM
hope has no grasp here
darkness clutches our hero
...it is just a reflex

Posted by: Khomar Oct 12 2005, 08:04 PM
QUOTE
the sleeper awakens
the game gives him back his life
he breathes the new air


[Try changing the first line to "the sleeper awakes" (lose one syllable)]

[Now for my first attempt...]

Out of deep despair
by helpful blows from a friend
true form is regained

Posted by: uberlegen Oct 12 2005, 08:18 PM
With feet of fury,
Triumph just one kick away,
His fingers wake up.

If the advice is ignored,
He might toss a coin her way.

[Haiku!]Shoka. Irish poem. Freaking brilliant.

Nice to see all these rookies here. I love company. w0ot^ to you guys.[/Haiku!]

Posted by: AllanO Oct 12 2005, 09:42 PM
Dispensing wisdom,
he bursts forth like the wind;
calm as still water.

Posted by: AncestralHamster Oct 12 2005, 10:22 PM
The dry desert plain
Blossoms with abundant life
After spring rains come.


[!haiku]
QUOTE (uberlegen @ Oct 12 2005, 07:18 PM)
[Haiku!]
Nice to see all these rookies here. I love company. w0ot^ to you guys.[/Haiku!]

Indeed. The haiku thread needs new blood. I hope our new members will continue to contribute to it.

To our new members, welcome! You may want to read my
http://www.filespace.org.nyud.net:8090/nom_de_plume/mtsdintro.html for some info on the SD forum traditions, including that of the haiku thread.

If you can't get enough "versifying", you may want to join the http://forums.megatokyo.com/index.php?showtopic=1703510.

As for the regulars who have participated in the metarengas before and who haven't done so lately ... shame shame shame! tongue.gif

[/!haiku]



Posted by: Rapierman Oct 13 2005, 03:28 AM
Reawakening.
The rebirth of the great soul.
The return to life.

Posted by: Shizuruu Oct 13 2005, 05:58 AM
The coffee gives strength
The s3x4 chixor gives means
The new game gives will

Posted by: Shizuruu Oct 13 2005, 06:03 AM
Fallen asleep in despair
Awake in a game brand new
Possibilites

Posted by: Drake_22 Oct 13 2005, 09:59 AM
the sleeper awakes
the game gives him back his life
he breathes the new air


(couldn't edit so I reposted)

Posted by: Shizuruu Oct 13 2005, 05:26 PM
l33t dude has returned
Dear messiah of the game
I have missed you so

The game has not been the same
Since we last played together


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