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|Posted by: AncestralHamster Oct 12 2005, 02:23 AM|
| Winter's grip relents.
From frozen earth new life grows,
Warmed by the sun's rays.
|Posted by: Rapierman Oct 12 2005, 02:31 AM|
| The phoenix rises
once again from the ashes.
The fire burns anew.
|Posted by: Navaruk Oct 12 2005, 02:56 AM|
Resetting the game again
Now press continue
|Posted by: Shoka Oct 12 2005, 03:20 AM|
| largo's blade flashes,
for he knows rule number one:
always cut the cards.
When Largo pwned Junko with ease,
The l33t d00d was secretly pleased;
He suggested a newer
That would bring sensei down to his knees.
|Posted by: Shizuruu Oct 12 2005, 06:40 PM|
| Fight will continue
Largo's strong spirit rises
Pheonix Move follows
|Posted by: NekuraEtowaru Oct 12 2005, 06:50 PM|
| Resurrection comes
The fox finds his way again
Unfased by turmoil
|Posted by: TheGreatHibiki Oct 12 2005, 07:00 PM|
| He awakens now
The monster inside his soul
Anger turned the tide
It has been a while hasn't it?
|Posted by: NekuraEtowaru Oct 12 2005, 07:12 PM|
| The snake is silent
Patient, it waits for its time
He's revealed through her
|Posted by: HomunculusGlory Oct 12 2005, 07:21 PM|
| The heavenly skill
Rises form the deep once more
To finish the foe
That's my first Hiaku...um...ever...I think I did somehting wrong
|Posted by: NekuraEtowaru Oct 12 2005, 07:26 PM|
[!Haiku] got the 5-7-5 part right, and didn't just summarize the strip...got a reference to nature in there...and that isnt even a must-have item...good job for a first attempt! PS: Brackets like the ones around what I'm saying here are used to indicate it isnt a haiku or (or renga in the renga thread)...you don't need them otherwise, FYI[/!Haiku]
|Posted by: waerloga Oct 12 2005, 07:36 PM|
| hope has no grasp here
darkness clutches our hero
...it is just a reflex
|Posted by: Khomar Oct 12 2005, 08:04 PM|
[Try changing the first line to "the sleeper awakes" (lose one syllable)]
[Now for my first attempt...]
Out of deep despair
by helpful blows from a friend
true form is regained
|Posted by: uberlegen Oct 12 2005, 08:18 PM|
| With feet of fury,
Triumph just one kick away,
His fingers wake up.
If the advice is ignored,
He might toss a coin her way.
[Haiku!]Shoka. Irish poem. Freaking brilliant.
Nice to see all these rookies here. I love company. w0ot^ to you guys.[/Haiku!]
|Posted by: AllanO Oct 12 2005, 09:42 PM|
| Dispensing wisdom,
he bursts forth like the wind;
calm as still water.
|Posted by: AncestralHamster Oct 12 2005, 10:22 PM|
| The dry desert plain
Blossoms with abundant life
After spring rains come.
Indeed. The haiku thread needs new blood. I hope our new members will continue to contribute to it.
To our new members, welcome! You may want to read my
http://www.filespace.org.nyud.net:8090/nom_de_plume/mtsdintro.html for some info on the SD forum traditions, including that of the haiku thread.
If you can't get enough "versifying", you may want to join the http://forums.megatokyo.com/index.php?showtopic=1703510.
As for the regulars who have participated in the metarengas before and who haven't done so lately ... shame shame shame!
|Posted by: Rapierman Oct 13 2005, 03:28 AM|
The rebirth of the great soul.
The return to life.
|Posted by: Shizuruu Oct 13 2005, 05:58 AM|
| The coffee gives strength
The s3x4 chixor gives means
The new game gives will
|Posted by: Shizuruu Oct 13 2005, 06:03 AM|
| Fallen asleep in despair
Awake in a game brand new
|Posted by: Drake_22 Oct 13 2005, 09:59 AM|
| the sleeper awakes
the game gives him back his life
he breathes the new air
(couldn't edit so I reposted)
|Posted by: Shizuruu Oct 13 2005, 05:26 PM|
| l33t dude has returned
Dear messiah of the game
I have missed you so
The game has not been the same
Since we last played together