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Megatokyo Forums > Story Discussions > Haiku [0739] Circuity: Loss


Posted by: Rapierman Jul 25 2005, 03:20 AM
Heavy with sorrow,
my sanity slips away.
Save me from myself.

Two deaths before my own eyes,
reality wars with hope.

Posted by: snark Jul 25 2005, 04:08 AM
Afraid of failure
I don't even try; so why
Do I still get hurt?


Even though I kept
At a distance, my heart is
Still rent by the wind
With all this sadness inside
I do not dare leave these walls

Posted by: Damion Requiem Jul 25 2005, 01:05 PM
Paper, like grey snow
Carried on a soot-streaked gale,
Flits aimlessly off.

Posted by: JRandomLurker Jul 25 2005, 04:59 PM
it's freaky; my dreams
always end with me covered
http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=524

(gomen, minna. XD )

Posted by: nuo Jul 25 2005, 05:09 PM
dude...that's some deep shti

Posted by: MoneyMan Jul 25 2005, 06:19 PM
I raise my sword high
then drop it on the cold ground
My will is not strong.

Posted by: NekuraEtowaru Jul 25 2005, 06:24 PM
The power to make
change, isnt a power that
I can ever have

Nekura

Posted by: Mintaka Jul 26 2005, 12:57 PM
A leaf is a wing
Is a propeller is a
Blade is ice cold wind

Posted by: NekuraEtowaru Jul 26 2005, 01:04 PM
I am left alone
in a sea of torn pages
who will save ME now?

Nekura

Posted by: DogBone Jul 26 2005, 04:09 PM
The wind, it blows on;
A dark cloud rides on its wings,
Unwelcome changes.

Can I push it back?
I'm still fearful and unsure
But I have to try.

Posted by: MulanLang Jul 26 2005, 04:21 PM
Trying to stop him
I dropped my carabiner
How do I get down?

Posted by: Katana Cowboy Jul 26 2005, 04:36 PM
Back here, up so high
Again, it must come to this
Blood mist floats skyward.

The wind propells us
Do we have another choice?
I can't fight a gale.

A halo; a book.
They are both gone forever,
Destroyed by the wind.

To push back the wind
Is such a thing possible?

I want to push it away
But I am afraid.

Wai.

Posted by: MadDoctorD Jul 26 2005, 09:49 PM
My friend, my angel
are gone forever. They leave
paper cuts on me.

I want to turn back,
turn back the wind against all,
but I can't do it.

Posted by: NekuraEtowaru Jul 26 2005, 10:19 PM
winter cold closes
around my heart, as the wind
will not be denied

inaction exacts
a high price, as I have lost
everything, to fear

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