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Megatokyo Forums > Story Discussions > Haiku: [0726] Circuity: Never Came Home

Posted by: AncestralHamster Jul 16 2005, 10:36 AM
Winter is coming.
Cast aside and abandoned:
Early frost chills my heart.

A thin plaintive cry.
Echoes of loneliness of
Abandoned fledgling.


Shoka filked for, but it fits the mood of this omake's episode.


Posted by: snark Jul 18 2005, 12:51 AM
Railing 'gainst the sky
Suddenly the wind changes
My sails are empty

Leaving? Without a goodbye?
Can she fly without me there?

Posted by: Rapierman Jul 18 2005, 01:19 AM
I see the winter.
It comes hard and it comes cold.
Sadness in its breath.

She cannot fend for herself.
Her friend has gone away now.

My friend knew this one.
I see the sadness in him.
Heavy is his heart.

Whither doth she go now?
To heaven or into hell?

Posted by: |\/|3647|20& Jul 18 2005, 05:33 AM
Look that girl has wings
but a halo she has not.
Largo looks quite sad.

... sorry to profane your noble practice. sad.gif

Posted by: Damion Requiem Jul 18 2005, 10:59 AM
An old, withered nest.
Its twigs, gone dry and brittle,
Whistle in the wind.

A faint cheep: The fledgling crow
Hopes without sheltering wing.

Posted by: codepoetica Jul 18 2005, 02:24 PM
Warrior's fallen
for former fallen, somber
by falling of rain.

Relationships forged
in fallen's land, torn asunder
in falling of rain.

Posted by: Navaruk Jul 18 2005, 03:38 PM
An empty wind asks
What are the meaning of wings
To those who canít fly

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