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|Posted by: Damion Requiem Jul 11 2005, 09:08 PM|
| Cursed coronation:
Down spins the steel-crown seed of
A wind-rusted wreath.
An angel rappels down from
The steel halo of the sky.
[!haiku] Damn. I've edited this thing 7 times now and it still just doesn't sound quite right. [/!haiku]
|Posted by: Chun Jul 11 2005, 09:21 PM|
| Fallen Hope Is Hit
Her Blank Eyes Filled with Sadness
Upon the Cool Ground
A Piercing Scream to Savior
As Pitiful As Her Blood
|Posted by: JRandomLurker Jul 11 2005, 09:31 PM|
| crumpled, cursed;
feathers flutter in
a cold wind
|Posted by: Shadowy Intent Jul 11 2005, 09:56 PM|
| Gravity Calls And
Anguished Screams Answer. Succor
Descends From On High.
Unheeded Warnings Abound.
The Rescuer's Fate: Uncertain.
Edit: Re: Moravia's Wrench-Plotting.
A Valiant Effort,
But Ultimately Futile.
Chaos Theory Reigns.
A Moving Target Skews The
Complex Calculations. Nice Try.