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Megatokyo Forums > Story Discussions > Haiku [733]: Circuity - Cursed


Posted by: Damion Requiem Jul 11 2005, 09:08 PM
Cursed coronation:
Down spins the steel-crown seed of
A wind-rusted wreath.

An angel rappels down from
The steel halo of the sky.


[!haiku] Damn. I've edited this thing 7 times now and it still just doesn't sound quite right. [/!haiku]

Posted by: Chun Jul 11 2005, 09:21 PM
Fallen Hope Is Hit
Her Blank Eyes Filled with Sadness
Upon the Cool Ground

A Piercing Scream to Savior
As Pitiful As Her Blood


~Chun


Posted by: JRandomLurker Jul 11 2005, 09:31 PM
crumpled, cursed;
feathers flutter in
a cold wind

Posted by: Shadowy Intent Jul 11 2005, 09:56 PM
Gravity Calls And
Anguished Screams Answer. Succor
Descends From On High.

Unheeded Warnings Abound.
The Rescuer's Fate: Uncertain.


Edit: Re: Moravia's Wrench-Plotting.
A Valiant Effort,
But Ultimately Futile.
Chaos Theory Reigns.

A Moving Target Skews The
Complex Calculations. Nice Try.

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