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Megatokyo Forums > Story Discussions > Haiku [0730] Dpd: Painting In Grays


Posted by: Rapierman Jul 4 2005, 11:39 PM
Her world is colored
by all the sadness in her.
She sees only grays.

Posted by: Kimiko-dono Jul 5 2005, 05:08 AM
1 4ppl4ud3 your l33t h41ku sk1llz.
(I applaude your elite haiku mastery)

--edit--
L33t sk1llz 4m n0t m1n3
H4rd t0 M4st3r th3se H41kuz
4rrgh 4rrgh 4rrgh 4rrgh 4rrgh

Isn't that just beautiful?

Posted by: Barbako Jul 5 2005, 05:19 AM
Cute boots, pretty clothes,
they draw people's eyes away
from her own sad grays.

Posted by: TibbyMSTie Jul 5 2005, 01:54 PM
Daily she half lives
A life of cold & grey ash
No hope for color




(Except for that darn cute kitty cat, that is!)
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