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Megatokyo Forums > Story Discussions > Haiku: [0729] - It Was A Good Day


Posted by: AncestralHamster Jul 3 2005, 09:53 PM
Chapter Summary Megahaiku Blast!

Erika

If I won this "game",
Why do I feel so hollow?
Empty victory.

Largo

Her game is not mine.
Lose a game, play another.
Yet this defeat stings.

Kimiko

Others have helped me.
Now, I can repay my debts
With my gentle strength.

Piro

I've screwed things up again,
Yet she's still talking to me ...
A first name basis?!

Miho

Queen's gambit misplayed.
Trying to make a connection:
Rejected again.

Ping

Miho and Piro:
Both are hurting, both have needs ...
How can I heal them both?

Junpei

From his hidden foes
Junpei defend l33tmaster.
Who defend Junpei?

Meimi Sonoda

Tangled emotions:
A snarled skein to unravel
In the name of love.

Posted by: Rapierman Jul 4 2005, 02:01 AM
[!haiku]

Along those same lines....

[/!haiku]

Erika

You thought you'd push him
and you would be safe again,
but that's just not so.

Largo

The game you play now?
It won't work this time around.
Time to learn new tricks.

Kimiko

All you needed was
a little self-confidence.
Now you are ready.

Piro

Things are not as bad
as they would appear to be.
Believe in yourself.

Miho

Listen to Momma.
If you play with matches, girl,
you'll get burned real quick.

Ping

When you find that your
loyalties are divided,
it creates problems.

Junpei

Not every task
is meant to kill somebody.
Just ask Meimi-san.

Meimi

To solve this riddle
You will need two important things:
Patience and wisdom.

Posted by: Kimiko-dono Jul 4 2005, 05:37 AM
Wow, those really suit the characters. Excellent. wink.gif

Posted by: Alcnolien Jul 4 2005, 08:06 AM
Um.... I don't mean to nitpick, but AncestralHamster's Piro haiku had 18 syllables instead of 17.
Just a thought. mellow.gif

Posted by: Jet lagg Jul 4 2005, 08:27 AM
you have to be nitpicky with haiku

Posted by: AncestralHamster Jul 4 2005, 09:10 AM
QUOTE (Alcnolien @ Jul 4 2005, 02:06 PM)
Um.... I don't mean to nitpick, but AncestralHamster's Piro haiku had 18 syllables instead of 17.
Just a thought. mellow.gif

[!haiku]

Fixed.

[/!haiku]

Piro

I've screwed up again,
Yet she's still talking to me ...
A first name basis?!

QUOTE (Kimiko-dono)
Wow, those really suit the characters. Excellent.

[!haiku]

Thank you.

[/!haiku]

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