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Megatokyo Forums > Story Discussions > Drabble [724] Already Broken

Posted by: Rapierman Jun 19 2005, 09:03 PM

A "drabble" is a prose consisting of exactly 50 (half), 100 (full) or 200 (double) words reflecting the thoughts and feelings of a fictional character.


And so, it has come to this: It's time for you to get out of your shell and take the leap of faith that you have feared for so long now. I'm laying my heart on the line here. I don't want it to get broken. My nose has already been broken once before. Don't cause it to break a second time.

Why do I trust you? Why is it that I'm attracted to you? Because you are a good man, and you have the potential to be better. I can tell: The way you beat yourself up when you're not sure, the way you get angry at yourself when you realize that you're being pathetic. I know you can be better. I have faith in you.

Now, it's time for you to have faith in yourself. You've handled Largo with some ease. There is so much that we can do together. I will be your support, your will to succeed in life. What you wish to be, I will help you become, as you have supported me while I strove to become a voice actress.

By the way, it's Kimiko. You have earned the right to call me that.

Posted by: RohanDX Jun 20 2005, 01:50 PM
While I really like your idea, these are obviously going to be far harder to create then rengas or haikus. In retrospect, prose isn't my strong point and I tend to stear clear, so no drabble from me. sleep.gif

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