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Posted by: Dark Morford Jun 17 2005, 12:38 AM
[renga]
Self-hate hurts others,
Do you want me to leave you?
I've been hurt before...

There's no need to be formal;
It's "Kimiko", Piro-san.
[/renga]

EDIT: One syllable too long...

Posted by: Chun Jun 17 2005, 12:43 AM
Tales of Love Woven,
Begun By a Simple Name,
Then Truly Becomes.

Deviation of Self Doubt,
Depress the Lost, Fill the New.

~Chun

Posted by: DCR Jun 17 2005, 12:52 AM
She swings for the fence
Clue bat whistling from her force
Home run or strikeout

Posted by: Original_Name Jun 17 2005, 01:02 AM
Relationships brew,
Largo stumbles down the street.
With a single threat;

He must listen to these words:
<It's "Kimiko", Piro-san.>

[Sorry, DM, couldn't help myself happy.gif ]

Posted by: SpongeGN Jun 17 2005, 01:19 AM
She's been hurt before,
Just don't break more than her nose,
Or face Erika.

Posted by: Artemi Jun 17 2005, 01:42 PM
With a challenge raised,
She now demands an answer.
The moment of truth...

Now, Piro-san, will you flee?
Or will the next move be yours?


Posted by: Diorama42 Jun 17 2005, 01:58 PM
She can wait no more,
Her eyes gazing into his.
Why won't he notice?

Patience can't last forever,
Now or never, Piro-sanů

Posted by: Rapierman Jun 17 2005, 04:40 PM
The lesson is taught.
It's time to review what you
learned on this calm night.

Kimiko, I am called now.
Are you ready, Piro-san?

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