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Megatokyo Forums > Story Discussions > Haiku [714]: Doomed


Posted by: Damion Requiem May 25 2005, 08:53 AM
A pure artist's hand,
Well aimed with good intent, moves.
A strike for the heart.

Guardian arm intercedes.
Blocked. Combatants at stalemate.

Posted by: rufiangel May 25 2005, 09:25 AM
It's like that nightmare
Where you're being madly chased
But you can't run fast

Only this time I can't wake
And she is far more fearsome

Posted by: Mintaka May 25 2005, 04:29 PM
These are both good haikus, but I must admit to liking Rufiangel's better. It's a wonderful and natural expression of Largo's feelings.

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