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|Posted by: Damion Requiem May 25 2005, 08:53 AM|
| A pure artist's hand,
Well aimed with good intent, moves.
A strike for the heart.
Guardian arm intercedes.
Blocked. Combatants at stalemate.
|Posted by: rufiangel May 25 2005, 09:25 AM|
| It's like that nightmare
Where you're being madly chased
But you can't run fast
Only this time I can't wake
And she is far more fearsome
|Posted by: Mintaka May 25 2005, 04:29 PM|
| These are both good haikus, but I must admit to liking Rufiangel's better. It's a wonderful and natural expression of Largo's feelings.