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Megatokyo Forums > Story Discussions > Haiku [709]: Weapon Trails

Posted by: snark May 11 2005, 08:46 PM
Declaring intent:
Spirit burns downward before
Rising phoenix-like

Sometimes a sharp shock
Is what is required for the
Heart to start again

[irish haiku]
It seems Largo is thoroughly plastered,
Even Piro's amazed that he's lasted,
And can manage to cry,
With hand raised to the sky,
While he lives, he will never be mastered!
[/irish haiku]

Posted by: Rapierman May 11 2005, 09:33 PM
How mighty he falls.
He gets up, screams, defiant.
But...sees weapon trails?

Posted by: Damion Requiem May 12 2005, 06:30 AM
A brown autumn leaf
Impaled on a wrought fencepost
Flapping in the breeze.

It cannot fall to the ground,
Cannot die with dignity.

Posted by: Mintaka May 16 2005, 09:09 PM
Near Aquarius
In very early morning --
Stars streak by like pain

Near the red planet of war,
Fleeing tomorrow's dawning.

I know the Eta Aquarids are pretty well over, but...Largo might well have seen something that looked like weapons trails. Neon in the right places. Planes. Fireworks. Dom and Ed's tracer rounds.

Posted by: White Raven May 16 2005, 10:24 PM
One of vibrant life
Is forgotten for friendship
Which thanks to is left

Heh heh... ^^; Not to great at Haikus. But hey.

Posted by: Kyaris May 17 2005, 04:48 PM
He's broken a heart,
And he's fallen apart.

(Not much of a song writer, but if this becomes a song, I'm so wanting a copy ^^)

Posted by: BluntEversmoke May 17 2005, 05:57 PM
Those of an open mind
Do see with ease:
Not only love is a battlefield.

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