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Megatokyo Forums > Story Discussions > [drabble - 707] Torn

Posted by: Rapierman May 6 2005, 07:37 PM

A "drabble" consists of 50 (half), 100 (full) or 200 (double) words reflecting the thoughts and feelings of a fictional character.


So torn. So heartbroken.

My truth is exposed. It stares me in the eye and accuses me.

I am beaten. I am wounded.

I did so much.

I have failed.

All my hopes and dreams are dead.

I am broken.

I am alone.

No, not alone. There is Ping.

No, Ping, stay, please. I need a shoulder to cry upon. Piro can wait. For now, stay with me. Hold me as you would a sister. I need comforting.

I will recover. I must. I cannot go back to that time.

I ache, and the fault is mine.

I must apologize.

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