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Posted by: Blacksilver Mar 4 2005, 10:50 PM
Talk of glorious things
Silenced by chill of spine
Born from broken wings

Posted by: Shoka Mar 4 2005, 11:54 PM
a bombshell
dropped by the bombshell;
got icecubes?

"These components" says Largo, "suffice,
"For a radically e-l33t device!"
But nine words from the girl
Make his eyebrows uncurl,
And leave the guy choking on ice.

Posted by: Lukkai Mar 5 2005, 12:32 AM
*Crunch* is all he says
The sound of icecubes breaking
As jaw meets skullbone

Once she was the iron lady
Then the girl with broken wings
Hereby now motives are shady
What's she thinking of all things?

QUOTE (Shoka)
a bombshell
dropped by the bombshell;
got icecubes?

Regarding the sound...
Know a good dentist?

Posted by: da dick Mar 5 2005, 04:20 AM
slience chills the heart
of eve,absent apples weep.
one more for the road.

Posted by: Brent Dax Mar 5 2005, 04:42 AM
[irish-haiku type="weak"]
The beautiful Erika will choose
To accuse the one with the booze.
"But what could this mean,"
The fangenders scream,
"Is it possible for him to refuse?"

Posted by: codepoetica Mar 5 2005, 07:35 AM
Dispensing false-love,
self-prescribed for shattered shield.
Regress, broken bird.

Posted by: Spiritsnare Mar 5 2005, 12:20 PM
Ice cubes? YAY, ICE CUBES!!
I slurp them up one by one
Very refreshing

(::insert coca-cola commercial-esque "ahh!" sound here:smile.gif

Posted by: Damion Requiem Mar 5 2005, 10:07 PM
Worn, wearied willow.
"Strip my flowers bare from me,
If you wish, and leave."

Will you abandon
Your fragile leaves, bare your limbs
For winter's cold peace?

Posted by: Rapierman Mar 5 2005, 10:14 PM
The question, the test.
Would he respect her after?
What is he made of?

Posted by: rufiangel Mar 6 2005, 12:11 AM
A silence ascends
Broken by a crunch of ice
Eyes hidden from view

"I don't understand."
"W3nch, how d4r3 j00 ask m3 th4t?!"

Maybe mere silence?

Or "Wh00t, I'd love to!"
"There is no honour in that."

But what if he says

"Why do you ph34r me?"
She stares, silently asking,
'What are you thinking?'

Posted by: Rapierman Mar 6 2005, 12:48 AM
If I had met you
in some non-descript bookstore,
would that be normal?

What am I to you?
Computer geek? Fanboy fool?
or perhaps it's more.

Why say to me, "Fool",
when there's a beam in your eye?
Pluck your board out first.

My world is no less
valid that the one you're in now;
but mine is better.

So gather your strength.
break out of that shell of yours,
and face me bravely,

or just sit there now,
passing time as you wither
away into death.

For when you face that
which pains you the most, you shall
be forever free.

Even young, deluded
fools like me can see the truth
written in your eyes.

Idol you once were, but
woman you shall be forever.
Just let yourself go.

Posted by: Artemi Mar 6 2005, 01:20 AM
QUOTE (codepoetica @ Mar 5 2005, 08:35 AM)
Dispensing false-love,
self-prescribed for shattered shield.
Regress, broken bird.

Waiting on her lonely perch,
And probing for an escape…?

With the first quest done,
And the dread mid-boss vanquished,
The work can now start.
Except, questions still remain,
Not all can be answered, though…

Posted by: Gleeb Mar 6 2005, 09:28 AM
He heard a question,
Ice chills his mouth and mind,
but what of his heart?

Posted by: da dick Mar 6 2005, 10:05 AM
bleak. the absence of
love lost , revived... re-open
chains of mellow doubt

Posted by: IAmNotADuck Mar 6 2005, 11:41 AM
No understanding;
The boy wants love; but he wants
her friendship foremost.

The past says different.
To her, another fanboy,
out for her body.

Her demons are convincing;
Healing those wings will be hard.

Posted by: Spiritsnare Mar 6 2005, 03:11 PM
Stupid boss had me
take so much painful damage
I am low on health.

[!haikuOOC]IAmNotADuck, your sig is utter genius.[/!haikuOOC]

Posted by: codepoetica Mar 6 2005, 03:44 PM
If I give unto
you desire's summit, wouldst
thee abandon still?

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