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Posted by: Lukkai Jan 26 2005, 02:43 PM
Where did he come from?
Ah well, it does not matter.
He's already gone.

Though she now has to admit,
She would have prefered a truck.

Annoying agent
Quickly removed from the scene
Was it 1337 master?

Posted by: Temenus Jan 26 2005, 03:02 PM
A surprise stage right
Vespa, third waistcoat button
Sega, black ops ... down

/Temenus, Exit, stage left...

Posted by: NightStrife Jan 26 2005, 03:31 PM
Bought with just a song
And new chains.

Only with clipped wings
Can you leave your cage.


Posted by: Artemi Jan 26 2005, 05:50 PM
Hmm. Well, that was odd...
A little chaos, is it?
is following...
Still, he could have done better.
I would have preferred a truck.

[!haiku]A little harder, here... Dom's rambles did not give me much to work with. *laugh*[/!haiku]

Posted by: Zero-Alpha Jan 26 2005, 05:55 PM
[irish haiku]
Out of nowhere Dom came looming,
And started the dooming-and-glooming.
But, defying convention,
Came a l33t intervention,
And off-panel Dom went zooming!
[irish haiku]


And that had to be the most tortured writing I have ever done. How could such an awesome comic be so hard to haiku?


Posted by: Rapierman Jan 27 2005, 10:13 PM
Erika just stands.
Dom pops in with promises.
Harrassment results.

In comes Muffin man.
Runs Dom off in Vespa.
the gun goes flying.

No more Dom tonight,
But Erika is not sated.
A truck she would prefer.

Posted by: l337 w4rr10r Jan 28 2005, 12:41 AM
from the crowds
came looming darkness
offered what
an unwanted promise
and threatening words

in disguise
as a muffin man
a hero?
a fanatic psycho
to a speedy "kwump"

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