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Posted by: CountAlpicola Jan 19 2005, 10:01 PM
As she went in search
for l33t parts for her machine
Largo followed along.

He trailed behind,
standing back respectuflly,
not interfering.

In this he shows trust
that she can do the right things
without too much help

while letting her errors,
whatever form they may take,
be only her own.

But Largo still can
make threats; real or contrived
to let her keep on

getting what she needs
from the young clerks in the store
with naught but closed minds.

Posted by: StormyJ Jan 19 2005, 10:12 PM
That's a pretty insightful haiku happy.gif
Nice!

Posted by: snark Jan 19 2005, 10:20 PM
[irish haiku]
Hayasaka's at somewhat a loss,
In showing these nerds who is boss,
The way Largo can pave,
If he can but behave,
And not make the pretty girl cross!
[/irish haiku]

[!haiku] On holiday, perhaps? Lacking inspiration? Driven mad by the maelstrom of torment that is writer's block? Or just without a reliable net connection? wink.gif

Where have all the poets gone,
Long time passing...

[/!haiku]

Posted by: Shoka Jan 20 2005, 12:52 PM
[irish_haiku]
When you handle these parts do not fail
To undress - does that cause you to quail?
Well, my expert advice
Is: your briefs may suffice -
Please describe them in loving detail!
[/irish_haiku]

Posted by: Lukkai Jan 20 2005, 06:45 PM
I'm sorry
I just didn't feel
Like writing

And now here I go
And try even so. dry.gif

[irish]
Speaking with them b'fore Erika
He's giving the clerks some extra
Instructions: "Go tell
Her to only handle
These parts wearing a slip and a bra!"
[/irish]

Asking her question
Not getting quite the answer
That was expected

Posted by: snark Jan 20 2005, 07:17 PM
QUOTE (Shoka @ Jan 20 2005, 06:52 PM)
[irish_haiku]
When you handle these parts do not fail
To undress - does that cause you to quail?
Well, my expert advice
Is: your briefs may suffice -
Please describe them in loving detail!
[/irish_haiku]

[irish haiku]
While I commend his attempts at a snare,
As such chances must be very rare,
But we saw yesterday,
An honour'ble melee,
Will result if he does not take care!
[/irish haiku]

Posted by: Shoka Jan 20 2005, 10:24 PM
QUOTE (snark @ Jan 20 2005, 07:17 PM)
[irish haiku]
While I commend his attempts at a snare,
As such chances must be very rare,
But we saw yesterday,
An honour'ble melee,
Will result if he does not take care!
[/irish haiku]

[irish_haiku]
We have seen that this bombshell is brisk,
When admiring fans start to frisk;
Though his snare may well draw
A right-cross to the jaw,
The potential reward's worth the risk!
[/irish_haiku]

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