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Megatokyo Forums > Story Discussions > Haiku: [0633] "measurable Progress"

Posted by: AncestralHamster Nov 10 2004, 09:56 AM
Chapter Summary Megahaiku Blast!


To keep from being hurt,
I've played at being the lone wolf.
The price is too high.


We're talking freely.
I'm learning more about him.
I think it's going well.


I'm so pathetic.
How could any girl like me,
Especially her?


I fought t3h 3vi1
but lost my job anyway.
That d00d's a l4m3r.


You disappoint me:
I'm looking for a challenge.
You are not worthy.


There you are, Miho!
Is this girl one of your friends?
She's got a crush? Cute!

Yuki Sonoda

He's still up for grabs.
That hag isn't his girlfriend ...
Another rival?!


We aren't family,
But I will be there for you,
Daughter of the heart.


He's driving me mad!
This crazy gaijin teacher!
And worse, he's flat broke.


Junpei wise to you.
You want her Idol power.
Junpei will stop you.


She has such power,
and it's going to waste unused.
I have plans for you ...


I'm hunting "wabbits."
How does she keep escaping?!
Curses! Foiled again!

Inspector Sonoda

You've blown her cover.
Unexploded ordinance
Must be kept hidden.


Still just a temp
But to her I'm a partner.
Things are looking up.

The Seraphims

No time for devils
When fighting for Piro's mind.
Besides, Asmo's a loser.


Gonna get it on
with red hot triplet action!
Hey, watch the hair, doc!

Posted by: Zeo Nov 10 2004, 03:28 PM
laugh.gif Well, some are touching and some are...hilarious. =P Nice job. Plus, it helped me remember all the characterz.

Posted by: Crin the sniper Nov 10 2004, 04:14 PM
I wonder how you can crank out so much good haiku, Hamster.

Posted by: NightStrife Nov 10 2004, 05:10 PM

Yuki's skipping school...
Must be off to see that dope.
Hey, where did I go?


Posted by: EBJ Nov 10 2004, 05:25 PM
I knew there was someone missing...

Had a nice hot lunch
Feeling dizzy, no one care
Need a vacation

Posted by: Bemused Owl Nov 10 2004, 05:51 PM
Man Moeko

My idol so sweet,
I came close, but that cute girl...
It was just too much!

Posted by: snark Nov 10 2004, 05:52 PM




My love was stronger,
But my needlework's in need
Of work. Crushed again!

[!haiku] wacko.gif Sorry 'bout that... [/!haiku]

[irish haiku]
As the chapter now draws to a close,
With a white-collar'd Seraphim pose,
There is many a w00t,
For Boo wearing a suit,
"Hamster chic" as we reach a repose.
[/irish haiku]

Owl may be bemused
But very quick on the draw
Inspiration shared happy.gif

Posted by: AncestralHamster Nov 10 2004, 09:46 PM

Thank you, Zeo, Crin.

Crin: I honestly don't know how to answer that question. Perhaps it's a form of expression that works for me.

Ah, we've others participating! Good, good, the haiku threads have been empty lately. It would be great if people started posting haiku regularly again.

And now for a 633-specfic haiku ...



Pleasant smiles
Over poisoned tongues.
Cutting words.


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