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Megatokyo Forums > Story Discussions > Haiku: [0623] - "are You Capable Of Playing This?"


Posted by: AncestralHamster Oct 18 2004, 01:49 AM
A pillar of strength,
Invincible Erika,
Toppled and shattered.

Her life in ruins,
Privacy sought to rebuild.
Unwelcome vandal.

Posted by: Arram Oct 18 2004, 01:58 AM
Solitary wish,
To escape reality,
And be left alone

Seeking the wounded,
An unexpected challenge.
The world focuses.

Posted by: snark Oct 18 2004, 02:24 AM
What we think we want
And what we really need, are
Often disparate

Dramatic change of subject
Takes her eyes off the problem

[irish haiku]
Erika:
I'm sitting in here feeling blue,
And the last thing I need now is you!
This room's for a break,
So make no mistake,
If you stay, you'll be getting one too!

Largo:
You may think that you need a retreat,
But you'll find it will make you feel beat,
C'mon, pull up a pew,
Allow me to show you,
Why it is people say I'm so l33t.
[/irish haiku]

Posted by: NightStrife Oct 18 2004, 07:08 PM
[dactyl haiku]

Whirlingly, whirlingly,
Ex-idol Erika
Hides in the break room to
Melt in despair.

Precipitatedly
She now must deal with an
Unwanted visitor
And his odd flare.

[/dactyl]

[!haiku] I think I'm making up words now. [/!haiku]

Posted by: Opt498 Oct 18 2004, 08:24 PM
またアンタ
ここはダメだよ
消えなさい

<You again?>
<You're not allowed here!>
<Please disappear.>

[!haiku=The form on that one doesn't quite satisfy me. Oh well.]

A test area?
A new and unproven game!
Can you assist me?

Posted by: Damion Requiem Oct 19 2004, 12:30 PM
Take the controller.
Sometimes, you must play, and must
breathe escapism.
Look down the gun-sights; you won't
see their scrutinizing eyes.

[!haiku] Bleh. Kinda weak, but it's all I could really manage...[/!haiku]

Posted by: Nebulious Oct 19 2004, 06:45 PM
QUOTE (snark @ Oct 18 2004, 03:24 AM)
What we think we want
And what we really need, are
Often disparate

Dramatic change of subject
Takes her eyes off the problem

Escape introspect
Oneself is a biased judge
But friends loan support

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