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Posted by: nekobawt Sep 29 2004, 02:36 AM
largo stands alone,
abandoned by his army,
wond'ring what is wrong.

calm before the storm?
or is the storm half over,
and this the storm's eye...?

[/!haiku] yes, i live. tongue.gif [!haiku]

Posted by: DCR Sep 29 2004, 02:41 AM
[3-5-3]

Godsmack said
It pretty well: I
Stand Alone

Posted by: XkyRauh Sep 29 2004, 10:35 AM
[ haiku? ]

Alone in the road,
an eerie chill in the air;
suspense can kill you. ;-)

[ irish haiku? ]

So his school-faring armies are gone,
and his fears are now bein' played upon;
there still is one brief
little sigh of relief:
at least traffic will hit him head-on!

(remember back in [16], Largo is hit by a bus because he's looking the wrong way on the street--seems he doesn't have that problem currently. :-) Unless this is a one-way street of some sort...)

--Xky *waving Mami flag happily*

Posted by: Lukkai Sep 29 2004, 11:47 AM
QUOTE (nekobawt @ Sep 29 2004, 10:36 AM)
calm before the storm?
or is the storm half over,
and this the storm's eye...?

We will have to see that yet.
And suspense is killing me!


Looking at the strip
I am somehow wondering
What will happen next?

Cause now we can see
That the battle is over.
So what will he do?

Posted by: NightStrife Sep 29 2004, 12:25 PM
[verse]

Desolation.
The empty space surrounds you,
Binds you.
Constricts you.

All that you had is gone.
All that you came for has left.
Moved on without you.
Forgotten you.

You worked.
You gave it everything you had.
It accused you.
Taunted you.
And ignored you.

Your confidence never wavered.
Your ideals held fast.
Both tossed aside.

A voice speaks from your shoulder.
To free you from your bind.

Resolution.
Everything back to normal.
It all feels wrong.

[/verse]

[!haiku] As does my complete lack of regard for meter, rhyming, and anything else that gives verse structure. I hope, anyway.

Oh, and two MDF members in one haiku thread! *waves to Xky* happy.gif [/!haiku]

Posted by: Nebulious Sep 30 2004, 04:02 AM
[Irish haiku]
Puzzled, our Great Teacher just stands here
For no matter how much he angsts and he leers
The girls flock to Piro
Like he's some kind of hero
Humpf. Who needs chix0r when you've got a beer?
[/Irish haiku]

Posted by: masamage Sep 30 2004, 11:21 AM
Amid the tempest,
A moment of clarity...
Or else, the reverse.

Posted by: Spiritsnare Sep 30 2004, 05:39 PM
RAM, chocolate chip
cookie, super Ebisu
Guess what Largo picked. wink.gif



Largo is silent
the silence before the storm
Quiet...too quiet...



Largo does not care
about anything except
the b33r Boo gave him

Posted by: Damion Requiem Sep 30 2004, 08:32 PM
Watch the portents, for
Hamlet is error'd: 'tis not
Denmark where rot lies.

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