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Posted by: Nebulious Sep 17 2004, 01:12 PM
[verse]
Love, that fairy, is a treacherous sprite
Enchanting the lonely with a dazzling light
It's not a maze, just a cold wall

Filling the head with a wondrous bliss
It runs away quickly, the high sorely missed
I used to be happy, standing so tall

They move away slowly from friends and home
Dinking false sustenance then left more alone
Where am I now? In over my head

It flies away faster, pick up the pace
Paved road turns to swamp, fall flat on your face
Now I've done it, I cut my last thread

The game is all over, the fairy then flees
They can now get up slowly, first onto sore knees
Eventually, we all have to fall
[/verse]

[/haiku]Edit: DANGIT! At least two errors in the subject line! I really need to learn how to type. dry.gif [haiku]

Posted by: DCR Sep 17 2004, 01:49 PM
Incoming train wreck
It's just been one of those days
Should have stayed in bed


Erika's control
An ability to maim
The wisdom not to

Posted by: snark Sep 18 2004, 02:33 AM
QUOTE (DCR @ Sep 17 2004, 07:49 PM)
Erika's control
An ability to maim
The wisdom not to

But coolness evaporates
In the heat of the moment

[irish haiku]
We see Erika trying to lend,
Some helpful advice to her friend,
Detailing her faults,
And sending small jolts,
Right down to Kimiko's adorable backpack.

"First you're putting up too big a wall,
Then making your distance too small."
But she shouldn't be snide,
For we all know that pride,
Will be followed by equal a fall.
[/irish haiku]

Posted by: DCR Sep 18 2004, 02:45 AM
QUOTE (snark @ Sep 18 2004, 01:33 AM)
But coolness evaporates
In the heat of the moment

Her arm's not broke yet!
Activate anti-rampage!
Now I've lost my cool!

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