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Posted by: nekobawt Sep 1 2004, 09:35 AM
a flurry of leaves
flutters around a shadow
though it will not budge

[/!haiku] hrm. that one was kind of lame. needs work...(edit: eh, whatever. laugh.gif )[!haiku]


Posted by: Dark Morford Sep 1 2004, 09:45 AM
Cruddy Dial-up Web
I can't haiku very much
Will get cable soon happy.gif

The angel appears
Trying to perk Piro up;
Which Sera is it?

Posted by: Lukkai Sep 1 2004, 01:30 PM
Seraphim
Or not Seraphim
I wonder
Because as it seems
There's more than one sis

Posted by: cosmicShadow Sep 1 2004, 03:54 PM

When pity hurts more
than a harsh beating, let your
consciience be your guide


[!haiku] Not necesarily my viewpoint on the situation, but it's still a description of the script. [/!haiku]

[[3-5-3]
Is this just
a test that Sera
has given?

I hope so.
He doesn't accept
her pity.

If he feels
as strong as he does,
just tell her!

[/3-5-3]

Posted by: masamage Sep 1 2004, 04:07 PM
If you can't handle
Pity or believe in kindness,
Then what do you want?

Posted by: snark Sep 1 2004, 05:31 PM
QUOTE (masamage @ Sep 1 2004, 10:07 PM)
If you can't handle
Pity or believe in kindness,
Then what do you want?

Hard to give kindness
Undeserved, but harder still
To accept the gift

Piro's not yet man enough
To accept Kimiko's help

Posted by: Forest Sage Sep 1 2004, 07:19 PM
Pity is given
to those who have no hope, to
what cannot be changed.

Sympathy: given
when pain is deep enough to
touch the ones who care.

And love? The only
gift one expects to get back
from the receiver.

Do not dismiss what
you have been given until
you know what you have.

Posted by: AncestralHamster Sep 1 2004, 09:24 PM
Physical pain pales
next to humiliation.
Pity just adds salt.

[3-5-3]

A blind worm
Cannot see the sun:
Sympathy.

[/3-5-3]

[!haiku]
Well said, Forest Sage.
[/!haiku]

Posted by: Nebulious Sep 1 2004, 10:50 PM
Stubborn dignity
The tree with moth-ridden leaves
Still needs the sunlight

QUOTE (Masamage)
If you can't handle
Pity or believe in kindness,
Then what do you want?
You're like a begger who asks
Only for change, but not work

[free style]
Conversation with a mirror
Every answer at the surface
Reflected with earnest innocence

To seek depth is to hit a wall
Only gaining what you have
What a useful tool, that mirror
[/free style]

Posted by: 4znh31r41z3r Sep 1 2004, 10:58 PM
Serephim seems genki
Am I not the only one
Who finds that kawaii?

Posted by: Nebulious Sep 1 2004, 11:01 PM
QUOTE (4znh31r41z3r @ Sep 1 2004, 11:58 PM)
Serephim seems genki
Am I not the only one
Who finds that kawaii?

Yes, but when you see cuteness
We all see you as hentai! tongue.gif

Posted by: Shoka Sep 2 2004, 02:02 AM
her pity-hug stings;
weakness attracts sympathy,
but not much respect.

store dignity as you will,
it won't keep off winter's chill.


will she value me
if I can't respect myself?
how long can it last?

respect yourself enough to
accept a generous heart.


[irish_haiku]
Said Sera, "Your charm ain't so hot,
"Being lame is the asset you got!"
Said Piro, "Well hey,
"Since you put it that way,
"I feel a lot better now - not."
[/irish_haiku]

Posted by: Garran Sep 2 2004, 07:23 PM
A tentative knock -
"Anou... Piro-san? Who
are you talking to?"

Posted by: Bookeater Sep 2 2004, 09:03 PM
Will Piro realize
that concern is a good sign?
put him right Sera!

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