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Posted by: AncestralHamster Aug 17 2004, 11:49 PM
[3-5-3]
A has-been?
Wrong, you foolish girl.
Shocked silent.
[/3-5-3]

Her splendour hidden,
Yet her power is undimmed.
The sun behind clouds.

Posted by: Opt498 Aug 17 2004, 11:57 PM
An innocent face
Struck dumb by worldly knowledge
Children with matches

Posted by: Nebulious Aug 18 2004, 12:10 AM
The dormant there lie
Wishing to fade and to die
Repeating: "Why, why?"

A teacher's lesson
The spoken word more potent
Than armies or guns

Power's fine lever
Tilts greatly off the center
When someone gets off

QUOTE (Opt498)
An innocent face
Struck dumb by worldly knowledge
Children with matches
What a notion he suggests,
That slight pressure ignites flame!

Posted by: DCR Aug 18 2004, 12:51 AM
Breezes quench the weak
But a hurricane only
Feeds a firestorm's might


Twenty-six soldiers
Made of lead marching from minds
Make impact on world


[3-5-3]
Great power
Given to the youth
Grave mistake
[/3-5-3]

Posted by: snark Aug 18 2004, 01:31 AM
With great power comes
Great responsibility
http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=574 indeed...

Posted by: Lukkai Aug 18 2004, 10:13 AM
Very powerful
But wrong use of Idorus
Leads to disaster


[dactyl]
More and more terrified
Junko is list'ning to
What her Great Teacher and
Others do say.

Tot'lly ignoring her
Classmate that's asking her
She's thinking "All we can
Do now is pray!"
[/dactyl]

Posted by: NightStrife Aug 18 2004, 01:26 PM
[irish haiku]
Largo claims that the game which they play
Has some rules of which they did not say,
So the boss tells him, "Son,
Bombs are like idols done,
And it's best if you're out of the way!"

[/irish]


Deploying idols.
No need for weapons when you
Can use emotions.
But what if such things should fall
Into unscrupulous hands?

Posted by: Pawa-eri-to Aug 18 2004, 06:30 PM
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Posted by: snark Aug 18 2004, 10:52 PM
QUOTE (NightStrife @ Aug 18 2004, 07:26 PM)
[irish haiku]
Largo claims that the game which they play
Has some rules of which they did not say,
So the boss tells him, "Son,
Bombs are like idols done,
And it's best if you're out of the way!"

[/irish]

[irish haiku]
If you had known, what would you have done?
You can't win just by having a gun;
That large plasma rifle,
Is merely a trifle:
Hayasaka's the dangerous one!
[/irish haiku]

Posted by: masamage Aug 19 2004, 12:53 AM
QUOTE (Nebulious @ Aug 17 2004, 11:10 PM)
Power's fine lever
Tilts greatly off the center
When someone gets off

Those remaining scramble for
Balance, indiscriminate.

(Mleh. Yours was better. ^^)

Posted by: Shoka Aug 19 2004, 01:21 AM
[irish_haiku]
Although Junko is speechless and stunned,
Her expression's an eloquent one:
"My teacher's a toon,
"And this cop is a loon,
"And there ain't a damn thing to be done!"
[/irish_haiku]

Posted by: Lukkai Aug 19 2004, 02:01 PM
[irish]
Largo it seems has to go.
Sonoda explains why it's so.
And behind those two,
Looking like a f00,
Is catatonic schoolgirl Junko.
[/irish]

QUOTE (Pawa)
<snip>

He did use haiku!
Still I gotta ask myself
He still was not banned?

Posted by: nekobawt Aug 19 2004, 04:57 PM
QUOTE (Lukkai @ Aug 19 2004, 01:01 PM)
QUOTE (Pawa)
<snip>

He did use haiku!
Still I gotta ask myself
He still was not banned?

if it makes you feel better,
think of it as "off topic."

bird arrests her flight,
thinking that the sky ahead
looks a bit stormy.*

[/haiku] *going on a random theory that junko is disturbed by the guys' conversation because she had been considering a career as a seiyuu/idoru. laugh.gif[haiku]

erika's career
end was badly mismanaged--
left her fans hanging. sad.gif

Posted by: masamage Aug 19 2004, 05:00 PM
QUOTE (Lukkai @ Aug 19 2004, 01:01 PM)
He did use haiku!
Still I gotta ask myself
He still was not banned?

Fear not his monkish posting--
Madness is a form of zen.

Uncomprehending,
But unharmed, permit his art--
Genius in disguise.

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