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Megatokyo Forums > Story Discussions > Drabble: [575] A Disturbing Smile


Posted by: Nebulious Jun 24 2004, 12:05 PM
Over the comics a past few days, I've been noticing that Piro's having a real epiphany. I saw a very interesting transition in this chapter from confusion, to sudden clarity, and now with poor Erika in her condition, its all finally processing. So, after seeing his 'game face' expression in yesterday's comic, I tried to write it in haiku, but the format was just too short. So, I made a drabble.

Sorry for rambling:


They truly are like zombies. They have no life, spending every waking moment in obsession. Whatís worse, a few weeks, maybe even days ago, I would have been out there. I would be waving a Moeko mallet and chanting 'Hayakasa-Hime'.

Hayakasa doesnít want this. This is why she disappeared! Being here, facing her past is killing her. Behind that cheerful face is aÖa friend who needs help. My help.

Piro, this is your chance to be someone. Too many times Iíve been too afraid to stand up for myself. I will take my life back by helping Erika reclaim hers!


Posted by: Flarechiisu Jun 24 2004, 12:22 PM
W00t! a moving speech, even if piro wouldnt say somthign like that in my oppinion, maybe if the mob were to brake in and things were drastic. but who knows, he may say somthing like that yet.

Nice job ^^ neb, it says "I am piro, this is my time, hear me rawr." .....except for the rawr part.

Posted by: TheGreatHibiki Jun 24 2004, 12:25 PM
Ooo, Another see's my Endgames Maturity Theory....

And a nice drabble too! laugh.gif laugh.gif

Posted by: snark Jun 24 2004, 10:14 PM
Yanagisawa (which I hope I spelt correctly):

Well, this is it. The smile is there; there's no sense in putting it off any longer. Just open the door and it's done. For me, anyway.

Can she take it? She hasn't had to deal with this for a loong time. She seems calm enough. But then, she would, wouldn't she? She's not really. She never was. One of the best in the business, could change her face like
*that*...

Just look at Piro. Quite the little bodyguard - didn't think he had it in him.

I hope he can look after her.

Okay. Time to open the floodgates.

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