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Posted by: Chun Jun 21 2004, 11:06 AM
Alright, after the whole "incident", suddenly, our original renga thread dissappeared. I don't know if it was an accidental delete, or intentional, but nevertheless, there wasn't much lost, so I'm not worried, nor am I angry.

Anywho, Let me break down the instructions to you all.

In this thread:

You will be doing alterating 5-7-5 syllable and 7-7 syllable poem parts for every single strip Yuki makes an appearance in, whether it be as a cameo, simply walking by, or her actually being the focus of the strip. Please make sure to focus on the YUKI aspect in the certain number comic; such as what she is thinking, what she reminds you of; make sure it's Yuki-related, otherwise it's just a rehash of Renga 2. Please Also, Italic your verses; just makes it that much easier to put it on the official site.

Make sure you progress through, including the Dead Piro Days, Guest Strips, Etc. If there's an image that day, that numbered strip; then it's renga-able.

Ok, so take an example, for instance.

Say the renga has gotten to strip 150. Thus, the post should occur as so:

------------------------------------------------------------------------------
http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=150<---Strip link along with bracket notation

Italicized For Easier Compilation For Myself
V
Mom, I'm Not Hungry<---5
Just Going Back To My Room<---7
With My Teddy Bear<---5

-------------------------------------------------------------------------------

That's how a post would be set up. The next post below it would be the two liner, first quoting the previous one.

---------------------------------------------------------------------------------
QUOTE
http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=150

Mom, I'm Not Hungry
Just Going Back To My Room
With My Teddy Bear


I'm Just Another Plain Girl<---7
I'll Never Be Held In Mind<---7

--------------------------------------------------------------------------------
And Voila, The renga section for Yuki's appearance in strip number 150 is complete! However, this is just what's required. There is an optional thing to do, which is a drabble, which will in no way effect the renga.

A Drabble is a 100 word paragraph describing feelings or subject matter. Since this is Yuki's Metarenga, much will either be interal dialogue, or perhaps analysis; these can be done at any time for whatever strip.

IF SOMEONE BEATS YOU TO DOING A PART IN THE RENGA, LEAVE THE POST AND MOVE ON, OR EDIT AND START A NEW ONE.

This was a minor problem in our first work, so just for clarity; I WILL ADD two parts, if necessary, if you just didn't make it in time and leave your post there. I don't mind at all. Just don't do it on purpose.



So, hopefully this little Naze-Nani has enlightened you to the world of the MT Meta-renga.

Happy renga-ing, and hope to hear from many a person on the forums soon!

NOTE: If you want to be an official member of the MT Renga-kas, please fill this info out as you post a thread; if not, I WILL STILL INCLUDE YOUR PARTS IN, no matter you are a member or not, and give some credit to you (Specifically, Your Username on the Page. IF YOU ARE ALREADY A MEMBER, please post your information for me here to put on the site; it's far better than PMing me one-on-one.

Renga-Ka:
Current Status: (All New Members Start Out as Just Members)
Forum Join Date:
Favorite Character: Character
Favorite Strip: [???]- Strip Name
Quote: "Text." ~From or Anonymous

Oh, let me explain the Statistics.
We count how many times you put parts in the renga. And with it, we give you rewards. It goes as follows:

(Rank): Over or At (_) Posts
Normal Member: 5 posts- Background Member Sig
Example:
user posted image

Genki-Ka: 22 posts- A DPD, COMIC,or SGD black and white cut, eye shot.
Sugoi-Ka: 35 posts- Colorized DPD, COMIC Shot, or SGD (CG I find most appealing, or your personal choice; I will ask you what you want)
Mega-Ka: 50 posts- Mega-Ka; Colorized CG Character
Ex:user posted image
("Sig Artist" will be replaced with "Mega-Ka")

I Only Make You A Custom Signature If You Request It.

However; I'm not a lean, mean, sig-making machine, so expect from one to two weeks till delivery, and know if you are going to be frequent, hold out till you reach your desired.

Aaand... I believe that is all. If you have any questions, make sure to PM me, or e-mail me at rengakachun@hotmail.com. Be sure to visit the site and sign the guestbook, if you could biggrin.gif.

That being said, Minna, Happy Renga-ing!

~Chun

Posted by: Nebulious Jun 21 2004, 12:17 PM
Very comprehensive. Oy, at least we hadn't gone far...

-Just a little nudge for my Piro sig.-

And now: [haiku=global]
----------------------------------------
http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=44

Possible foreshadow
A group of plucky school girls
Spot Piro reading

Posted by: AncestralHamster Jun 21 2004, 09:24 PM
QUOTE (Nebulious @ Jun 21 2004, 06:17 PM)
http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=44

Possible foreshadow
A group of plucky school girls
Spot Piro reading

An innocent encounter
will change her life forever.


[!renga]
Re: Comprehensive delete. Hmmph. Everyone's a critic. dry.gif
[/!renga]

Posted by: Chun Jun 22 2004, 02:12 PM
http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=46

I Don't Think He Knows
That What He Reads Is Not His
This...American.


~Chun

Comprehensive delete? What do you mean? Oh, and sorry for the lack of terminology in the explaination.

Wow... has all our members deserted us, or what? Guess it's time to hire some new recruits.

Posted by: masamage Jun 22 2004, 03:40 PM
QUOTE (Chun @ Jun 22 2004, 01:12 PM)
http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=46
I Don't Think He Knows
That What He Reads Is Not His
This...American.

Mysterious stranger? Heh.
He ran off like a scared cat.

Posted by: snark Jun 22 2004, 04:06 PM
QUOTE (masamage @ Jun 22 2004, 09:40 PM)
Mysterious stranger? Heh.
He ran off like a scared cat.

http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=49

Innocence entertains
No thoughts of prying, just of
Returning treasure


QUOTE (AncestralHamster @ Jun 22 2004, 03:24 AM)
[!renga]
Re: Comprehensive delete. Hmmph. Everyone's a critic. dry.gif
[/!renga]

[!renga]Maybe someone's just trying to bring Draegos back?[/!renga]

Posted by: masamage Jun 22 2004, 04:29 PM
QUOTE (snark @ Jun 22 2004, 03:06 PM)
http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=49
Innocence entertains
No thoughts of prying, just of
Returning treasure

Yuki is helpful; two threads
Inextricably woven.

Posted by: Chun Jun 22 2004, 04:49 PM
QUOTE (masamage @ Jun 22 2004, 04:29 PM)
Yuki is helpful; two threads
Inextricably woven.

http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=51

If Piro Wins It
The Simulation Begins
But Largo Fires...


~Chun

*Ties a headband around his head

Alright. Time to make Masa and Nebulious' sigs, and update the page!

*Cracks hands

Posted by: masamage Jun 22 2004, 05:43 PM
QUOTE (Chun @ Jun 22 2004, 03:49 PM)
http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=51
If Piro Wins It
The Simulation Begins
But Largo Fires...

Glance away, but draw nearer;
Or stare in horror, and flee.


[!renga] W00t, I remembered one from the first attempt! ^_^

Go Chun go! Waiii~ [/!renga]

Posted by: snark Jun 22 2004, 06:27 PM
QUOTE (masamage @ Jun 22 2004, 11:43 PM)
Glance away, but draw nearer;
Or stare in horror, and flee.

http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=54

Lie flows easily
As she justifies away
Stalking the artist

Posted by: Nebulious Jun 22 2004, 06:37 PM
QUOTE (masamage @ Jun 22 2004, 06:43 PM)
Glance away, but draw nearer;
Or stare in horror, and flee.

http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=54

A flawless liar
Piro's typical sketchpad
Is Pandora's Box


[/haiku]
QUOTE (AncestralHamster)
[!renga]
Re: Comprehensive delete. Hmmph. Everyone's a critic. 
[/!renga]

sad.gif Did I inadvertently offend you?

QUOTE (Chun)
Alright. Time to make Masa and Nebulious' sigs, and update the page!
Yaaaaaay! happy.gif Go Chun![haiku]

Posted by: Chun Jun 22 2004, 07:08 PM
QUOTE (Nebulious @ Jun 22 2004, 06:37 PM)
http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=54

A flawless liar
Piro's typical sketchpad
Is Pandora's Box


These Drawings Are Amazing
Can't Show My Parents Though.


Remember people; no need to edit if you didn't know.

Alright, after some work by zoom and text cuttage, here are Neb's and Masa's Color sigs (Since you guys have been active tongue.gif)

user posted image
Not an "official" CG but still good, I hope. It's hard to find a good Kotone CG with an eye shot tongue.gif. I loved this one.

user posted image
Fairly easy to obtain the image, but took a bit or resizing.

Well, off I go to the official page.

By the way, Snark, would you like to join us?

~Chun

EDIT: Oh, and those that are worried about me giving credit to whoever's images I used; I've PMed them that they can at any time ask me to remove it. I will also put credits on the official page.

Posted by: Nebulious Jun 22 2004, 07:38 PM
QUOTE (Chun @ Jun 22 2004, 08:08 PM)
These Drawings Are Amazing
Can't Show My Parents Though.

http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=55

An upset artist
"What if they have my bookbag!?"
Oh Piro, they do


*adorms shiny sig with pride*
[/haiku]Many thanks, Chun! biggrin.gif [haiku]

Posted by: Chun Jun 22 2004, 11:30 PM
QUOTE (Nebulious @ Jun 22 2004, 07:38 PM)
http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=55

An upset artist
"What if they have my bookbag!?"
Oh Piro, they do



I'm Sure He Won't Mind Writing
It's Not Ecchi... but Pretty.


~Chun

Neb, make sure to focus mainly on the Yuki perspective or panel; we need not know about Piro's situation unless absolutely necessary.

Oh,
QUOTE
*adorms shiny sig with pride*
[/haiku]Many thanks, Chun!  biggrin.gif [haiku]


No problem smile.gif. Thanks for your work!

Posted by: masamage Jun 23 2004, 12:04 AM
http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=56
I don't feel repelled
When I look at these girls; it's
Like he respects them.


Whee~! Thank you, Chun.

Posted by: Chun Jun 23 2004, 12:13 AM
QUOTE (masamage @ Jun 23 2004, 12:04 AM)
http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=56
I don't feel repelled
When I look at these girls; it's
Like he respects them.



Great, My Stupid Onii-Chan;
My Hentai, Baka, Brother.


QUOTE
Whee~! Thank you, Chun.

I should thank you biggrin.gif. Thanks for offering help and your postage.

~Chun

EDIT: 12:30 AM Already? Ahh... Rant tomorrow... and hopefuly a REAL update.

Posted by: AncestralHamster Jun 23 2004, 09:10 AM
http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=75

He lost his sketchbook.
Looking for Mister Piro:
His number one fan.

[!renga]
Chun: I'm referring to the original Yuki renga thread being deleted along with all the troll's spam. As Nebulious wrote, it was quite comprehensive, thus "comprehensive delete." Since the Yuki renga was deleted with the spam, it could be taken a criticism of the quality of our verse, thus my remark, "Everyone's a critic."

Nebulious: No, I was not offended. The remark was a little joke that failed, so just ignore it.

QUOTE (snark @ Jun 22 2004, 10:06 PM)
Maybe someone's just trying to bring Draegos back?

blink.gif Aaaahhh! Run! Run for the hills!

[/!renga]

Posted by: Ph33rTh3B33r Jun 23 2004, 01:22 PM
[!Renga] *Drags himself away from RP.* Bringing Draegos back? How interesting... one of my characters drank a bottle of yukifanboyism. Much fun now to be had![/!Renga]

QUOTE
He lost his sketchbook.
Looking for Mister Piro:
His number one fan.


The goddess sends an e-mail...
How dare he make her find him!

[!Renga]
Renga-Ka: Ph33rTh3B33r
Current Status: Mega-Ka
Forum Join Date: 18th of October, 2002
Favorite Character: Yuki wub.gif
Favorite Strip: Still looking.
Quote: "It's craptastic!" - Me on just about everything.

Posted by: Chun Jun 23 2004, 02:51 PM
http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=80

Such A Dorky Bag
I Will Find Him And Give Him
What He... Truly Needs


~Chun

I updated the website; please read my rant and such for details... I'm really sorry about all of it... please PM me when you can, and tell me what you think here.

*Sigh*My inbox is open...

Posted by: Keita-chan Jun 23 2004, 03:56 PM
QUOTE
http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=80

Such A Dorky Bag
I Will Find Him And Give Him
What He... Truly Needs


Man, this bag is so not cool...
Not even a cell phone pouch.


My info seems to have disappeared from the Renga-Kas website, so here it is again.

Renga-Ka: Keita-chan
Current Status: Genki-Ka (I had 26 renga posts in the metarenga thread, 34 actual contributions if you count verses in both rengas with one post as two.)
Forum Join Date: Apr. 14, 2003
Favorite Character: Kimiko-chan! wub.gif
Favorite Strip: http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=372
Quote: "This isn't a retreat! It's...uh...a tactical rearward advance!" --Shigeru Akamatsu, Betterman Night 10: Worms

Posted by: snark Jun 23 2004, 04:03 PM
QUOTE (Keita-chan @ Jun 23 2004, 09:56 PM)
Man, this bag is so not cool...
Not even a cell phone pouch.

http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=84

"Stop asking questions!
I wish she'd get off my case"
Unsettled conscience

Posted by: cantabile Jun 23 2004, 10:07 PM
QUOTE (snark @ Jun 23 2004, 04:03 PM)
http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=84

"Stop asking questions!
I wish she'd get off my case"
Unsettled conscience

Blackmail doesn't really help
Such great help from friends like these...

Posted by: affert Jun 24 2004, 06:37 AM
http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=87

'Ohhh! You have a crush!'
If only I knew something
about this artist...


[!Haiku]This is a really cool idea! I'm definatly in.


Renga-Ka: affert
Current Status: Just Member
Forum Join Date: 1-May 01
Favorite Character[s]: Yuki and Boo
Favorite Strip: 103 Bathroom cleaning chemicals and 466 not d34d yet (boo's pose rocks)
Quote: " I have come that they may have life, and have it to the full" ~Jesus (John 10:10)
[/!Haiku]

Posted by: Desmonthesis Jun 24 2004, 06:58 AM
QUOTE

[87]

'Ohhh! You have a crush!'
If only I knew something
about this artist...


I wish I knew why he's sad...
Perhaps no one knows his work?


Renga-Ka: Desmonthesis
Current Status: Just Member
Forum Join Date: 8-June-2004
Favorite Character: Piro and Erika
Favorite Strip: [544]- f33ling it
Quote: "Before you criticize someone, make sure you walk a mile in their shoes first. That way, if they get mad, you're already a mile away and you have their shoes!" ~ Anonymous

Posted by: affert Jun 24 2004, 07:32 AM
http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=88

She, with downcast eyes
walks away unknowing from
one she'll later know.

Posted by: Desmonthesis Jun 24 2004, 07:36 AM
QUOTE (affert @ Jun 24 2004, 07:32 AM)
http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=88

She, with downcast eyes
walks away unknowing from
one she'll later know.

He sees her leaving the store
And runs, hoping to follow...

Posted by: affert Jun 24 2004, 07:52 AM
http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=89

Having forgotten
something, she turns to see a
mascot look away.

Posted by: Chun Jun 24 2004, 09:21 AM
QUOTE (affert @ Jun 24 2004, 07:52 AM)
http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=89

Having forgotten
something, she turns to see a
mascot look away.

I'll Have To Return His Bag
I Don't Mind Holding It More


~Chun

Next strip: 91

Welcome to the crew! biggrin.gif

Posted by: Desmonthesis Jun 24 2004, 09:28 AM
http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=91

I have my CD's.
I guess we'll get lunch after,
But where'd that guy go?


Posted by: Nebulious Jun 24 2004, 10:04 AM
QUOTE (Desmonthesis @ Jun 24 2004, 10:28 AM)
http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=91

I have my CD's.
I guess we'll get lunch after,
But where'd that guy go?

I'd wager he's far away
In America, even


[haiku]The Yuki files: 92, 94, 97, 98, 123, 147, 150, 155, 160, 161, 162, 165, 194, 196, 197

There, that should help for a while.

Edit: Forgot that its eaisier to have it here...

Renga-Ka: Nebulious
Current Status: Mega-Ka
Forum Join Date: March 10, 2004
Favorite Character: Piro and Dom
Favorite Strip: [420] - Out of Print
Quote: "Existence is a thought, bound together by a delicate balance. Respect all of its facets."
[/haiku]

Posted by: affert Jun 24 2004, 10:42 AM
QUOTE (Nebulious @ Jun 24 2004, 04:04 PM)
I'd wager he's far away
In America, even


http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=92


"I'd like to get this"
Book-bag-boy causes suprise:
run quickly away.

Posted by: cantabile Jun 24 2004, 11:16 AM
QUOTE (affert @ Jun 24 2004, 10:42 AM)
http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=92


"I'd like to get this"
Book-bag-boy causes suprise:
run quickly away.

...leaving the CDs behind.
Did he see? I can't be sure.











[!renga]
Also, since I somehow neglected to do it last time:

Renga-Ka: cantabile
Current Status: "just member"
Forum Join Date: 8 June 04
Favorite Character: Junpei, Erika, Miho, Yuuji, the mysterious angry schoolgirl
Favorite Strip: too lazy to search
Quote: "Bigmouth strikes again." ~ the Smiths (from the song of the same name)
[/!renga]

Posted by: ChibiChibi Jun 24 2004, 11:40 AM
http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=94

Running far away
From my silly little fear
Of falling in love...


[Haiku] Goodness I got into this late. I hope this matches the tone...

And instead of searching:http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=97, http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=98, Just a small mention http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=111, http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=123, and that's it for chapter 0!
[/haiku]

Posted by: affert Jun 24 2004, 11:50 AM
QUOTE (ChibiChibi @ Jun 24 2004, 05:40 PM)
Running far away
From my silly little fear
Of falling in love...


I hope they do not catch me
and force me to face myself



http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=97

Finally escaped.
quick run, then stand and wonder:
"What am I doing?"



[EDIT] added next...
[EDIT^2] spelling :blush:

Posted by: cantabile Jun 24 2004, 12:03 PM
QUOTE (affert @ Jun 24 2004, 11:50 AM)
http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=97

Finaly escaped.
quick run, then stand and wonder:
"What am I doing?"

Frozen for a moment here,
no idea what comes next...

Posted by: Ph33rTh3B33r Jun 24 2004, 02:21 PM
http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=98

Just return the bag!
Go back to the store, and say...
The goddess, accused!?

Posted by: affert Jun 24 2004, 02:36 PM
QUOTE (Ph33rTh3B33r @ Jun 24 2004, 08:21 PM)
http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=98

Just return the bag!
Go back to the store, and say...
The goddess, accused!?

"That's why I have it with me!"
...so why can't I return it?



http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=123

Blaming Mami for
putting her finger on the
place she won't admit

Posted by: Keita-chan Jun 24 2004, 02:40 PM
QUOTE (affert @ Jun 24 2004, 03:36 PM)
http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=123

Blaming Mami for
putting her finger on the
place she won't admit

"Don't think I can do with you...
There's something I need to do."

Posted by: cantabile Jun 24 2004, 03:09 PM
http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=147

Showing up to work,
Piro's sketchbook in my hand
Oops... I should have known...

Posted by: snark Jun 24 2004, 03:30 PM
QUOTE (cantabile @ Jun 24 2004, 09:09 PM)
http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=147

Showing up to work,
Piro's sketchbook in my hand
Oops... I should have known...

These fans do the strangest things...
Why does my head hurt so much?

Posted by: Nebulious Jun 24 2004, 05:47 PM
QUOTE (Snark)
These fans do the strangest things...
Why does my head hurt so much?

http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=150

I don't feel myself
My nauseous, nervous stomach...
Shouldn't love feel good?


[/haiku]There, I think I'm finally starting to get the hang of the character rengas... wacko.gif [haiku]

Posted by: snark Jun 24 2004, 09:53 PM
QUOTE (Nebulious @ Jun 24 2004, 11:47 PM)
http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=150

I don't feel myself
My nauseous, nervous stomach...
Shouldn't love feel good?

How can I express myself?
He sees just a little girl

Posted by: AncestralHamster Jun 24 2004, 10:14 PM
http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=155

Meeting him again:
This isn't what I pictured.
Why won't he answer?


[!renga]
So far, the metarengas seem more popular than the regular haiku threads. At least we have a greater variety of respondents in the metarenga.
[/!renga]

Posted by: cantabile Jun 24 2004, 10:18 PM
QUOTE (AncestralHamster @ Jun 24 2004, 10:14 PM)
http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=155

Meeting him again:
This isn't what I pictured.
Why won't he answer?

He's just hiding behind a
Nakayoshi comp - what gives?


[!renga]
(Maybe not exactly in character... wink.gif )
[/!renga]

Posted by: snark Jun 25 2004, 12:21 AM
QUOTE (cantabile @ Jun 25 2004, 04:18 AM)
He's just hiding behind a
Nakayoshi comp - what gives?

http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=160

I feel so ashamed
So long in returning it
He must miss it so

Posted by: masamage Jun 25 2004, 12:42 AM
QUOTE (snark @ Jun 24 2004, 11:21 PM)
http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=160
I feel so ashamed
So long in returning it
He must miss it so

I need him to understand
How awe-inspiring he is!

Posted by: Nebulious Jun 25 2004, 03:37 AM
QUOTE (masamage @ Jun 25 2004, 01:42 AM)
I need him to understand
How awe-inspiring he is!

http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=161

What are are they doing!
Must my friends always but in?
Have I missed my chance?


[/haiku]Ugh...I can't recall if I used the right 'but.' If I'm wrong, let me know.[haiku]

Posted by: ChibiChibi Jun 25 2004, 08:57 AM
QUOTE
[161]

What are are they doing!
Must my friends always but in?
Have I missed my chance?



Too many people watching,
I should sum this up and leave

Posted by: cantabile Jun 25 2004, 12:38 PM
QUOTE
Too many people watching,
I should sum this up and leave


http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=162

"Himitsu yo ne."
Why can't they stop asking me?
I don't know myself.

Posted by: masamage Jun 25 2004, 08:27 PM
QUOTE (cantabile @ Jun 25 2004, 11:38 AM)
http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=162
"Himitsu yo ne."
Why can't they stop asking me?
I don't know myself.

It was embarrassing.
Go away so I can cry.


QUOTE (Nebulious)
Ugh...I can't recall if I used the right 'but.' If I'm wrong, let me know.

Other kind, nyo. ^_^_v

Posted by: cantabile Jun 25 2004, 10:33 PM
QUOTE (masamage @ Jun 25 2004, 08:27 PM)
It was embarrassing.
Go away so I can cry.

http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=165

"Panties in a bunch"?
Very funny. I'm still here.
Am I in love- uhngwkkk...









[!renga]
I assume the ending sound effect to be one syllable... happy.gif
[/!renga]

Posted by: masamage Jun 25 2004, 11:40 PM
QUOTE (cantabile @ Jun 25 2004, 09:33 PM)
http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=165
"Panties in a bunch"?
Very funny. I'm still here.
Am I in love- uhngwkkk...

There's no reason to see him
Again... Uwaaeee?! Sketchbook??

Posted by: affert Jun 26 2004, 06:17 PM
http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=196
Brushing her long hair
she comes to a decision
"After school, I'll ask"

Posted by: Keita-chan Jun 27 2004, 08:08 PM
QUOTE (affert @ Jun 26 2004, 07:17 PM)
http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=196
Brushing her long hair
she comes to a decision
"After school, I'll ask"

I guess I should just ask him...
I really hope he'll say yes.


Posted by: AncestralHamster Jun 28 2004, 08:07 AM
http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=197

Her decision made.
She no longer shows symptoms
of a schoolgirl crush.


Posted by: Desmonthesis Jun 28 2004, 08:46 AM
QUOTE (AncestralHamster @ Jun 28 2004, 08:07 AM)
http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=197

Her decision made.
She no longer shows symptoms
of a schoolgirl crush.

Her brother is annoying
That's why she stomped on his foot.

Posted by: Desmonthesis Jun 28 2004, 09:04 AM
http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=212
My friends? Idiots.
Do they not understand me?
I am not in love!


Posted by: cantabile Jun 28 2004, 09:37 AM
QUOTE (Desmonthesis @ Jun 28 2004, 09:04 AM)
http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=212
My friends? Idiots.
Do they not understand me?
I am not in love!

Just... why does he hate his art?
...Is your hearing selective?






[!renga]
Yuki appearances for the rest of chapter 2: [233], [247], [248], [250], [251], [254], [263], [267], [270], [301]
[/!renga]

Posted by: Keita-chan Jun 28 2004, 01:19 PM
http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=233

Sorry, I'm busy...
No, I'm not gonna see him...
Say what!? No! You can't!

Posted by: cantabile Jun 28 2004, 05:49 PM
QUOTE (Keita-chan @ Jun 28 2004, 01:19 PM)
http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=233

Sorry, I'm busy...
No, I'm not gonna see him...
Say what!? No! You can't!

You say you support me, but...
Oh no, I gave it away!

Posted by: affert Jun 28 2004, 06:01 PM
http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=247
My decision stands
Although I wish they would stop
talking behind me.

Posted by: Ph33rTh3B33r Jun 28 2004, 06:57 PM
QUOTE (affert @ Jun 28 2004, 08:01 PM)
http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=247
My decision stands
Although I wish they would stop
talking behind me.

Have I seen this guy? Gomen!
They are pretty persistent...

Posted by: snark Jun 28 2004, 07:38 PM
QUOTE (Ph33rTh3B33r @ Jun 29 2004, 12:57 AM)
Have I seen this guy?  Gomen!
They are pretty persistent...

http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=248

"Mr. Piro-san?"
It's so hard to talk, even
Though I know I must

Posted by: AncestralHamster Jun 28 2004, 08:48 PM
QUOTE (snark @ Jun 29 2004, 01:38 AM)
http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=248

"Mr. Piro-san?"
It's so hard to talk, even
Though I know I must

Butterflies in my stomach:
You have such power o'er me.

Posted by: cantabile Jun 29 2004, 11:33 AM
QUOTE (AncestralHamster @ Jun 28 2004, 08:48 PM)
Butterflies in my stomach:
You have such power o'er me.

http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=250

No running away.
"Can you teach me how to draw?"
There, simple as that.

Posted by: adeyke Jun 29 2004, 11:33 AM
QUOTE
http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=250

No running away.
"Can you teach me how to draw?"
There, simple as that.


"What is she doing?" they ask.
I just want to learn to draw.

Posted by: Keita-chan Jun 29 2004, 02:09 PM
http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=251

Won't you please show me,
How you make such pretty art?
You cannot? But why?

Posted by: cantabile Jun 29 2004, 02:40 PM
QUOTE (Keita-chan @ Jun 29 2004, 02:09 PM)
http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=251

Won't you please show me,
How you make such pretty art?
You cannot? But why?

Because you're going home soon?
I can tell you're sorry, but...

Posted by: affert Jun 29 2004, 07:17 PM
http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=254
A no nonsense girl
arrives. My, she is bossy!
I will need supplies...

Posted by: ChibiChibi Jun 30 2004, 10:50 AM
QUOTE
[254]
A no nonsense girl
arrives. My, she is bossy!
I will need supplies...


Perverse and embarassing
Thank you language barriers!


[haiku]lang-uage as two sylables[/haiku]

Posted by: adeyke Jun 30 2004, 12:55 PM
http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=263

Reluctant answer:
Yes. Thank you, Piro-sensei!
Tomorrow, we start.

Posted by: cantabile Jun 30 2004, 12:59 PM
QUOTE (adeyke @ Jun 30 2004, 12:55 PM)
http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=263

Reluctant answer:
Yes. Thank you, Piro-sensei!
Tomorrow, we start.

Lessons coming; I can't wait!
Someday I will make him proud.

Posted by: masamage Jun 30 2004, 04:41 PM
http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=267
Take his suffering
Upon myself! It's only
Logic. Piiiro-saan....


Edit: Oi. >_<

Posted by: snark Jun 30 2004, 05:36 PM
QUOTE (masamage @ Jun 30 2004, 10:41 PM)
http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=267
Take his suffering
Upon myself! It's only
Logic. Piiiro-saan....

Of course I should be obsessed;
That's what girls do in manga!

Posted by: AncestralHamster Jun 30 2004, 08:10 PM
http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=270

To a whole new world
Miho has introduced me.
I love the night life.

Posted by: cantabile Jun 30 2004, 08:28 PM
QUOTE (AncestralHamster @ Jun 30 2004, 08:10 PM)
http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=270

To a whole new world
Miho has introduced me.
I love the night life.

When I'm here, I can forget.
...Or pretend. I've learned a lot.

Posted by: AncestralHamster Jun 30 2004, 08:58 PM
http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=301

Shoujo manga fuels
Her romantic fantasies.
Hopeful dreams of him.

Posted by: masamage Jun 30 2004, 10:31 PM
QUOTE (AncestralHamster @ Jun 30 2004, 07:58 PM)
http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=301
Shoujo manga fuels
Her romantic fantasies.
Hopeful dreams of him.

...I love 'To be continued's.
Everything will be okay.

Posted by: cantabile Jun 30 2004, 11:06 PM
QUOTE (masamage @ Jun 30 2004, 10:31 PM)
...I love 'To be continued's.
Everything will be okay.

http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=308

Such a nice morning!
"Hello, teacher!" ...You're surprised?
Nice, and funny, too!


edit:
[!renga]
Chapter 3 begun! Further Yuki sightings: [322], [326], [328], [333], [384], [385], [386], [389], [401]
[/!renga]

Posted by: AncestralHamster Jun 30 2004, 11:55 PM
QUOTE (cantabile @ Jul 1 2004, 05:06 AM)
http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=308

Such a nice morning!
"Hello, teacher!" ...You're surprised?
Nice, and funny, too!


Lighthearted and eager now
as she asks for his promise.


Posted by: snark Jul 1 2004, 04:13 AM
QUOTE (AncestralHamster @ Jul 1 2004, 05:55 AM)
Lighthearted and eager now
as she asks for his promise.

http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=322

Not daring to turn
Back to back with opponent
I did not expect

Posted by: Nebulious Jul 1 2004, 04:38 AM
QUOTE (Snark)
[322]

Not daring to turn
Back to back with opponent
I did not expect

Vying for the same man's love
A race only one will win

Posted by: ChibiChibi Jul 2 2004, 08:51 AM
http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=326

How about this pose?
What's my motivation?
Where's my trailer?!


[haiku] Yuki was sounding too sad. happy.gif [/haiku]

Posted by: Chun Jul 2 2004, 09:06 AM
QUOTE (ChibiChibi @ Jul 2 2004, 08:51 AM)
http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=326

How about this pose?
What's my motivation?
Where's my trailer?!


She Searches For Her Piro
Leaving Cute Evil To Thrive


~Chun

See my signature; sorry I haven't been posting much; I'll be ready with a lot of things when I get back. I still need your info, Masa, so please get that to me when you can.

Posted by: cantabile Jul 2 2004, 03:21 PM
http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=333

Chasing after him
Even my daydreams end up
so tragic, somehow...


Posted by: snark Jul 2 2004, 11:55 PM
QUOTE (cantabile @ Jul 2 2004, 09:21 PM)
http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=333

Chasing after him
Even my daydreams end up
so tragic, somehow...

Different reason for blush
I hope they don't realise

Posted by: AncestralHamster Jul 3 2004, 09:15 AM
http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=384

Arriving early,
Hoping for more time with him.
Disappointment looms ...

Posted by: Nebulious Jul 3 2004, 12:09 PM
QUOTE (AncestralHamster @ Jul 3 2004, 10:15 AM)
http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=384

Arriving early,
Hoping for more time with him.
Disappointment looms ...

At last we'll have privacy
I hope I'm not too early


[/haiku]Interesting...I was flipping thruogh the 300's looking for more Yuki apprences, and I happened to find http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=577 http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=338, http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=340, and http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=350. [haiku]

Posted by: cantabile Jul 3 2004, 04:38 PM
QUOTE (Nebulious @ Jul 3 2004, 12:09 PM)
At last we'll have privacy
I hope I'm not too early

http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=385

What? He isn't here?
On errands all afternoon?
I guess I can wait.


Posted by: masamage Jul 4 2004, 12:21 AM
QUOTE (cantabile @ Jul 3 2004, 03:38 PM)
http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=385
What? He isn't here?
On errands all afternoon?
I guess I can wait.

If he's been gone all this time...
He's got to be back soon, right?


[!renga] Hai~, gomen! I'll PM that to you, Chun. [/!renga]

Posted by: Ph33rTh3B33r Jul 4 2004, 02:06 AM
http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=386

The sun has gone down...
He said he'd teach me to draw.
Why isn't he here?

[!renga] Poor Yuki... [/!renga]

Posted by: AncestralHamster Jul 4 2004, 08:42 AM
QUOTE (Ph33rTh3B33r @ Jul 4 2004, 08:06 AM)
http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=386

The sun has gone down...
He said he'd teach me to draw.
Why isn't he here?

He promised not to forget.
Inside, I die a little.

Posted by: affert Jul 4 2004, 10:30 AM
http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=389
Alone, the phone rings,
'I'm sorry I bothered you'
'Are you sure? Promise?'

Posted by: Nebulious Jul 4 2004, 10:37 AM
QUOTE (affert @ Jul 4 2004, 11:30 AM)
http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=389
Alone, the phone rings,
'I'm sorry I bothered you'
'Are you sure? Promise?'

I so enjoy your presence
But is the vice-versa true?

Posted by: cantabile Jul 4 2004, 05:36 PM
http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=401

Scattered on the floor:
papers, pencils, secret dreams.
My wings are so small.

Posted by: AncestralHamster Jul 4 2004, 07:36 PM
QUOTE (cantabile @ Jul 4 2004, 11:36 PM)
http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=401

Scattered on the floor:
papers, pencils, secret dreams.
My wings are so small.

Hawklike, I soar through the skies.
Only in my dreams ... for now.

Posted by: adeyke Jul 4 2004, 07:55 PM
http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=413

I wander sadly.
Why didn't Piro call back,
So we could talk more?

Posted by: snark Jul 4 2004, 08:51 PM
QUOTE (adeyke @ Jul 5 2004, 01:55 AM)
http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=413

I wander sadly,
Why didn't Piro call back,
So we could talk more?

Rational thought is misplaced
Behind whirl of emotion

Posted by: masamage Jul 4 2004, 08:51 PM
QUOTE (adeyke @ Jul 4 2004, 06:55 PM)
http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=413
I wander sadly,
Why didn't Piro call back,
So we could talk more?

Did he...turn it off, so he
Wouldn't have to talk to me?


Edit: Woops! Beaten to it. Use the Snark's instead. ^_^

Posted by: affert Jul 5 2004, 07:02 AM
http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=414
Last night was a night
where nothing happened at all,
despite my wishes.


[!Haiku] Next few: 419, 433, 450, 456, 501, 503, 504, [522 523 (not main story)] Well, that's the rest of chapter 4 [/!Haiku]

Posted by: ChibiChibi Jul 5 2004, 07:38 AM
QUOTE
[414]
Last night was a night
where nothing happened at all,
despite my wishes.


My friends are so worried;
I guess that is a good thing

Posted by: AncestralHamster Jul 5 2004, 08:53 AM
http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=419

Lost in my despair,
Even annoying Asako
Cannot bother me.

Posted by: snark Jul 5 2004, 05:31 PM
QUOTE (AncestralHamster @ Jul 5 2004, 02:53 PM)
http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=419

Lost in my despair,
Even annoying Asako
Cannot bother me.

With all of my suffering
Asako's no consequence

Posted by: ChibiChibi Jul 5 2004, 11:27 PM
http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=433

Sometimes I wonder
who's affection I hold most
A crush's or friend's

Posted by: Master Edward Jul 6 2004, 01:42 AM
QUOTE (ChibiChibi @ Jul 6 2004, 05:27 AM)
http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=433

Sometimes I wonder
who's affection I hold most
A crush's or friend's

with friends in need such as these
who needs extra enemies?

Posted by: Nebulious Jul 6 2004, 04:40 AM
QUOTE (Master Edward @ Jul 6 2004, 02:42 AM)
with friends in need such as these
who needs extra enemies?

http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=450

Why Piro-senseii?
Uncertainty hurts my head
!...Asako hurts more!

Posted by: Chun Jul 6 2004, 11:01 AM
QUOTE (Nebulious @ Jul 6 2004, 04:40 AM)
http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=450

Why Piro-sensei?
Uncertainty hurts my head
!...Asako hurts more!

Oh No, Here Comes The Teacher
I'm So Confused... Why? Sigh...


~Chun

Small Update. Will Add as I work.

Posted by: cantabile Jul 6 2004, 04:07 PM
QUOTE (Chun @ Jul 6 2004, 11:01 AM)
Oh No, Here Comes The Teacher
I'm So Confused... Why? Sigh...

http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=456

"Please leave a message."
What? It's a woman speaking?
I suppose it's her.

Posted by: snark Jul 6 2004, 04:22 PM
QUOTE (cantabile @ Jul 6 2004, 10:07 PM)
http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=456

"Please leave a message."
What? It's a woman speaking?
I suppose it's her.

"Why borrowed so late at night?"
Logic falls to troubled heart

Posted by: Nebulious Jul 6 2004, 06:44 PM
QUOTE (snark @ Jul 6 2004, 05:22 PM)
"Why borrowed so late at night?"
Logic falls to troubled heart

http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=501

Please have him notice
It's hard making my plain self
Match the book's beauty

Posted by: affert Jul 6 2004, 06:57 PM
QUOTE (Nebulious @ Jul 7 2004, 12:44 AM)
http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=501

Please have him notice
It's hard making my plain self
Match the book's beauty

Perhaps today, he will see
how much he does mean to me...

Posted by: adeyke Jul 6 2004, 09:28 PM
http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=503

He's with that woman.
Is she the one Piro loves?
Sad, I look away.

Posted by: masamage Jul 7 2004, 12:13 AM
QUOTE (adeyke @ Jul 6 2004, 08:28 PM)
http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=503

He's with that woman.
Is she the one Piro loves?
Sad, I look away.

I...want to see him. And she
Was nice, before... Maybe--eh??

Posted by: snark Jul 7 2004, 02:29 AM
QUOTE (masamage @ Jul 7 2004, 06:13 AM)
I...want to see him. And she
Was nice, before... Maybe--eh??

http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=504

It's my brother! But...
Hayasaka Erika?
Never heard of her!

Posted by: adeyke Jul 7 2004, 09:08 AM
QUOTE
http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=504

It's my brother! But...
Hayasaka Erika?
Never heard of her!


How can boring me compete,
With a famous ex-seiyuu?

Posted by: Chun Jul 7 2004, 10:00 AM
http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=522

Yep, I'm On My Break
What's This? A Server Alone
I Deserve A "Raise"


~Chun

Just letting you all know what've been working on.

Last Couple Yuki Appearances Till Next: [563], [566]

From after 566, whenever Yuki appears, the first ones to reply in the renga about it take those spots. However; from here, don't hog the renga afterwards. EX: If Yuki appears in [600] and you make one part of it, but then appears in [601], [602], and [605] don't post in those right away after Fred posts it. Give others a chance.

And please do not start another character renga; a three day grace period is enough to help me recouperate.

Rant Up. Read Up and learn tongue.gif.

Posted by: cantabile Jul 7 2004, 11:12 AM
QUOTE (Chun @ Jul 7 2004, 10:00 AM)
http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=522

Yep, I'm On My Break
What's This? A Server Alone
I Deserve A "Raise"

We'll take care of ya, honey.
Step this way, now, don't be shy...

Posted by: Keita-chan Jul 7 2004, 12:12 PM
http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=563

Who cares about her?
I bet he cannot stand her...
Where'd Miho come from?

Posted by: Chun Jul 7 2004, 12:34 PM
I'm Hoping To Find Answers
In The Manga I Find Here.


~Chun

Chun Oops: Er, I forgot about the actual auction itself. Yuki appears again as an officer at [523]. Gomen.

Posted by: cantabile Jul 7 2004, 01:01 PM
QUOTE (Chun @ Jul 7 2004, 12:34 PM)
I'm Hoping To Find Answers
In The Manga I Find Here.


~Chun

Chun Oops: Er, I forgot about the actual auction itself. Yuki appears again as an officer at [523]. Gomen.

[!renga]
Well, then, I'll just backtrack, if no one minds.
[/!renga]

http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=523

Time for the auction.
Here's hoping they pay in cash.
...What's up with that guy?

Posted by: snark Jul 7 2004, 03:52 PM
QUOTE (cantabile @ Jul 7 2004, 07:01 PM)
http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=523

Time for the auction.
Here's hoping they pay in cash.
...What's up with that guy?

I was rather bored before
But a psycho with a knife...?

Posted by: Master Edward Jul 8 2004, 02:40 AM
http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=566

About Piro-san
Why does Miho know so much -
I don't need a dress!

Posted by: adeyke Jul 8 2004, 06:57 AM
QUOTE
http://www.megatokyo.com/index.php?strip_id=566

About Piro-san
Why does Miho know so much -
I don't need a dress!


I wish I could be the one
To catch Piro-sensei's heart.

Posted by: masamage Jul 8 2004, 01:28 PM
Erm...so, okay, what are we doing now? Continuing it in realtime?

I don't think that's a very good idea, to be honest...people will be stepping on eachother's toes all over the place. Should we wait until the next chapter, maybe, as with the normal renga?

Posted by: Chun Jul 8 2004, 01:35 PM
QUOTE (masamage @ Jul 8 2004, 01:28 PM)
Erm...so, okay, what are we doing now? Continuing it in realtime?

I don't think that's a very good idea, to be honest...people will be stepping on eachother's toes all over the place. Should we wait until the next chapter, maybe, as with the normal renga?

Actually, now that I think about it, it'll be competitive racing now.

Perhaps a stopping point is in order.

This system I've thought up will be brutal.

Suggestions or agreements for next point, anyone?

~Chun

Posted by: Keita-chan Jul 8 2004, 02:36 PM
Why not just do the same thing we're doing with the original metarenga? Stop it for now, and pick it back up once Chapter 5 is done. Then rinse and repeat for Chapter 6, and so on.

Posted by: cantabile Jul 8 2004, 02:39 PM
QUOTE (Keita-chan @ Jul 8 2004, 02:36 PM)
Why not just do the same thing we're doing with the original metarenga? Stop it for now, and pick it back up once Chapter 5 is done. Then rinse and repeat for Chapter 6, and so on.

Seconded, or actually thirded, since I believe that's what masamage proposed as well.

Posted by: Chun Jul 8 2004, 03:10 PM
That's why I said "or agreements for next point". I think it's a great idea as well.

Alright, see you next meta-renga.

~Chun

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