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Posted by: nekobawt Jun 11 2004, 01:29 AM
"encourage piro
to the path of 'do nothing.'"
on sera's checklist.

[!haiku] will add more later once i've slept on it a bit...[/!haiku]

Posted by: snark Jun 11 2004, 03:22 AM
[haiku waltz]
Masterly dastardly,
Angelic Seraphim,
Mixes up Piro with
Her odd advice.

Naughty Asmodeus,
Seems to appreciate,
Amnesiastically*
Not being nice.
[/haiku waltz]

[!haiku]*I don't think it's a real word, but it goes so nicely! happy.gif [/!haiku]

Posted by: DCR Jun 11 2004, 08:22 AM
"She's vulnerable!"
Be vewy, vewy quiet
I'm http://img63.photobucket.com/albums/v191/DeadChickenRunning/sniper.jpgAsmo

Posted by: AncestralHamster Jun 11 2004, 09:23 AM
A pleasurable warmth
answered with icy reply.
His hopes killed by frost.

QUOTE (DCR @ Jun 11 2004, 02:22 PM)
"She's vulnerable!"
Be vewy, vewy quiet
I'm hunting Asmo

Vulnerable, yes.
But Piro lacks the courage
and she's not easy.

[3-5-3]
Worry not
Asmo will get his.
Wait and see.
[/3-5-3]

Posted by: DCR Jun 11 2004, 11:04 AM
QUOTE (AncestralHamster)
A pleasurable warmth
answered with icy reply.
His hopes killed by frost.

Blood with fire inside
Rushes around full of plans
Indifferance pools

Posted by: PatheticEli Jun 11 2004, 11:06 AM
Whats going on?
Is this my conscious
I'm so confused.

Posted by: cantabile Jun 11 2004, 12:00 PM
[haiku]
Sera has a point.
Is it the girl or the myth
that he's fighting for?
[/haiku]

[slapdash Irish haiku]
There once were two consciences brutal.
The remiss one gave her refutal.
Her acerbic reply
as she turned with a sigh:
"What's the use? It's quite obviously futile."
[/slapdash Irish haiku]

Posted by: TheGreatHibiki Jun 11 2004, 12:08 PM
Strangely logical
The now evil angel waits
Her words fight his heart


[OOC: Okay I return once again to Haiku, hope I'm not rusty.]

Posted by: 1n50mn14c Jun 11 2004, 03:02 PM
An old friend returns
after amnesia sets in.
Will she remember?


Two for one conscience,
you get the good with the bad.
Asmo's not needed.

Posted by: masamage Jun 11 2004, 03:36 PM
It's honesty, not
Spite. I'm just helping this guy
See the truth, which is
That none of these girls is worth
More than a brief glance. If that.

[http://www.stinky.com/dactyl/dactyl.html]
Clappity clappity--
Wicked Asmodeus
Gloats in the wake of her
Logical harm;

Sera, despite being
Unrecognizably
Cruel, is still unim-
pressed with his charm.
[/waltz]

Posted by: Lukkai Jun 11 2004, 06:03 PM
I'm very sorry.
Did not see this thread, even
Searching the list twice.

/haiku
Yeah, I looked at the list twice and still didn't see, nekobawt had already posted this one, so I started another haiku thread.
Maybe I shouldn't post after writing four synthesis reports in a row. wacko.gif
Well here's my haiku from the other thread:
haiku:

QUOTE
The evil angel
Has lost most her memory.
Or is she faking?

/haiku
Talking about Asmo and him trying to lure Piro into doing the 'H'. Not very good I phear.
haiku:

Looking at this strip I'm confused,
Wherever she's straight or she choosed,
To simply ignore him
And thus make the chance slim
He ever got Piro seduced.

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