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|Posted by: nekobawt Jun 11 2004, 01:29 AM|
| "encourage piro
to the path of 'do nothing.'"
on sera's checklist.
[!haiku] will add more later once i've slept on it a bit...[/!haiku]
|Posted by: snark Jun 11 2004, 03:22 AM|
| [haiku waltz]
Mixes up Piro with
Her odd advice.
Seems to appreciate,
Not being nice.
[!haiku]*I don't think it's a real word, but it goes so nicely! [/!haiku]
|Posted by: DCR Jun 11 2004, 08:22 AM|
| "She's vulnerable!"
Be vewy, vewy quiet
|Posted by: AncestralHamster Jun 11 2004, 09:23 AM|
| A pleasurable warmth
answered with icy reply.
His hopes killed by frost.
But Piro lacks the courage
and she's not easy.
Asmo will get his.
Wait and see.
|Posted by: DCR Jun 11 2004, 11:04 AM|
Blood with fire inside
Rushes around full of plans
|Posted by: PatheticEli Jun 11 2004, 11:06 AM|
| Whats going on?
Is this my conscious
I'm so confused.
|Posted by: cantabile Jun 11 2004, 12:00 PM|
Sera has a point.
Is it the girl or the myth
that he's fighting for?
[slapdash Irish haiku]
There once were two consciences brutal.
The remiss one gave her refutal.
Her acerbic reply
as she turned with a sigh:
"What's the use? It's quite obviously futile."
[/slapdash Irish haiku]
|Posted by: TheGreatHibiki Jun 11 2004, 12:08 PM|
| Strangely logical
The now evil angel waits
Her words fight his heart
[OOC: Okay I return once again to Haiku, hope I'm not rusty.]
|Posted by: 1n50mn14c Jun 11 2004, 03:02 PM|
| An old friend returns
after amnesia sets in.
Will she remember?
Two for one conscience,
you get the good with the bad.
Asmo's not needed.
|Posted by: masamage Jun 11 2004, 03:36 PM|
|It's honesty, not
Spite. I'm just helping this guy
See the truth, which is
That none of these girls is worth
More than a brief glance. If that.
Gloats in the wake of her
Sera, despite being
Cruel, is still unim-
pressed with his charm.
|Posted by: Lukkai Jun 11 2004, 06:03 PM|
| I'm very sorry.
Did not see this thread, even
Searching the list twice.
Yeah, I looked at the list twice and still didn't see, nekobawt had already posted this one, so I started another haiku thread.
Maybe I shouldn't post after writing four synthesis reports in a row.
Well here's my haiku from the other thread:
Talking about Asmo and him trying to lure Piro into doing the 'H'. Not very good I phear.
Looking at this strip I'm confused,
Wherever she's straight or she choosed,
To simply ignore him
And thus make the chance slim
He ever got Piro seduced.