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Posted by: masamage Jun 7 2004, 05:18 PM
[3-5-3]
Innocent of face,
She grasps something broken from
An innocent face.
[/3-5-3]

Posted by: PhoenixLord Jun 7 2004, 05:23 PM
QUOTE (masamage @ Jun 7 2004, 06:18 PM)
[3-5-3]
Innocent of face,
She holds a piece broken from
An innocent face.
[/3-5-3]

Standard syllables
Your poem has, it would seem
Changed your mind, did you?

The dark Sorceress
Slain a creature of pure good
Little known of her

EDIT:
Pirogoeth's name
is dificult to haiku
Fred makes our lives hard

[/haiku] Err, that last line is a bit bad. Sorry[haiku]

Posted by: masamage Jun 7 2004, 05:34 PM
QUOTE (PhoenixLord @ Jun 7 2004, 04:23 PM)
Standard syllables
Your poem has, it would seem
Changed your mind, did you?

Gracious! I suppose I did.
But I'll leave the post unchanged.

(My error:
A warning to those
Who shall come.)

Posted by: AncestralHamster Jun 7 2004, 08:00 PM
Virgins have to eat.
Unicorn, better you than me.
Fatal attraction.

Posted by: snark Jun 7 2004, 08:00 PM
[!haiku]Having been introduced to a nifty new form by masamage, I'm going to give it a go...[/!haiku]

[dactyl haiku]
Tiggety tuggety
Piro's game sorceress
Brandishes what she just
Ripped off a beast

Do not feel sorry for
Oft hunted unicorn
Unrecognisably
'Scapes to the east
[/dactyl haiku]

EDIT:
[!haiku]Oooo.... they are too! Good choice of name, masamage![/!haiku]

Posted by: masamage Jun 7 2004, 09:14 PM
QUOTE (snark @ Jun 7 2004, 07:00 PM)
[dactyl haiku]

[!haiku]
Aren't they fun? ^_^ My mother pointed out to me a few minutes later that they have the same pattern as a waltz; ONE-two-three ONE-two-three. I find this charming, and think I'll call it that from now on. Hee.

For those who don't know what we're talking about, these are properly called http://www.stinky.com/dactyl/dactyl.html, and are sort of addictive.
[/!haiku]

[waltz haiku]
Swishity flappity--
Gamelady Piroko
Stands, shining prize in hand,
Looking so clean...

What's with the spiky thing?
Coincidentally,
I just killed six zombies.
Where have you been?
[/waltz]

Edit: *giggles at AncestralHamster for a while*

Posted by: snark Jun 7 2004, 10:52 PM
QUOTE (masamage @ Jun 8 2004, 03:14 AM)
[waltz haiku]
Swishity flappity--
Gamelady Piroko
Stands, shining prize in hand,
Looking so clean...

What's with the spiky thing?
Coincidentally,
I just killed six zombies.
Where have you been?
[/waltz]

[irish haiku]
Sir Largo, I think you have jested,
'Bout the zombies you claim to have bested,
I can most plainly see,
That you're still level three,
And you're looking quite thoroughly rested!
[/irish haiku]

Posted by: nekobawt Jun 7 2004, 11:38 PM
one less unicorn,
but some spells are well worth the...
"rare"...ingredients. ninjanatsD.gif

largo wonders at
pirogoeth's new "spike thing."
he prefers his sword.

Posted by: cantabile Jun 8 2004, 01:41 PM
I'll bite.

[haiku]
Death of innocence
becomes far more tragic when
caused unknowingly.
[/haiku]

(Reading between the lines, including plot elements not specifically in this DPD. Do forgive me.)

Posted by: Lukkai Jun 8 2004, 01:49 PM
A unicorn's horn
The sorceress firmly holds.
Wherefrom did it come?


Unicorns.
Often are they slain
For their horns.

Edited for additional poem

Posted by: masamage Jun 8 2004, 04:31 PM
QUOTE (cantabile @ Jun 8 2004, 12:41 PM)
(Reading between the lines, including plot elements not specifically in this DPD. Do forgive me.)

Bravo! :D

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