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|Megatokyo Forums > Story Discussions > Haiku : Dpd - Darkwoods Pirogoeth|
|Posted by: masamage Jun 7 2004, 05:18 PM|
Innocent of face,
She grasps something broken from
An innocent face.
|Posted by: PhoenixLord Jun 7 2004, 05:23 PM|
Your poem has, it would seem
Changed your mind, did you?
The dark Sorceress
Slain a creature of pure good
Little known of her
is dificult to haiku
Fred makes our lives hard
[/haiku] Err, that last line is a bit bad. Sorry[haiku]
|Posted by: masamage Jun 7 2004, 05:34 PM|
Gracious! I suppose I did.
But I'll leave the post unchanged.
A warning to those
Who shall come.)
|Posted by: AncestralHamster Jun 7 2004, 08:00 PM|
| Virgins have to eat.
Unicorn, better you than me.
|Posted by: snark Jun 7 2004, 08:00 PM|
| [!haiku]Having been introduced to a nifty new form by masamage, I'm going to give it a go...[/!haiku]
Piro's game sorceress
Brandishes what she just
Ripped off a beast
Do not feel sorry for
Oft hunted unicorn
'Scapes to the east
[!haiku]Oooo.... they are too! Good choice of name, masamage![/!haiku]
|Posted by: masamage Jun 7 2004, 09:14 PM|
Aren't they fun? ^_^ My mother pointed out to me a few minutes later that they have the same pattern as a waltz; ONE-two-three ONE-two-three. I find this charming, and think I'll call it that from now on. Hee.
For those who don't know what we're talking about, these are properly called http://www.stinky.com/dactyl/dactyl.html, and are sort of addictive.
Stands, shining prize in hand,
Looking so clean...
What's with the spiky thing?
I just killed six zombies.
Where have you been?
Edit: *giggles at AncestralHamster for a while*
|Posted by: snark Jun 7 2004, 10:52 PM|
Sir Largo, I think you have jested,
'Bout the zombies you claim to have bested,
I can most plainly see,
That you're still level three,
And you're looking quite thoroughly rested!
|Posted by: nekobawt Jun 7 2004, 11:38 PM|
| one less unicorn,
but some spells are well worth the...
largo wonders at
pirogoeth's new "spike thing."
he prefers his sword.
|Posted by: cantabile Jun 8 2004, 01:41 PM|
| I'll bite.
Death of innocence
becomes far more tragic when
(Reading between the lines, including plot elements not specifically in this DPD. Do forgive me.)
|Posted by: Lukkai Jun 8 2004, 01:49 PM|
| A unicorn's horn
The sorceress firmly holds.
Wherefrom did it come?
Often are they slain
For their horns.
Edited for additional poem
|Posted by: masamage Jun 8 2004, 04:31 PM|
Welcome to the forums, and welcome to the haiku threads!