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Posted by: nekobawt May 26 2004, 10:51 AM
yuki works herself
into embittered frenzy;
miho eggs her on.

"my dear, why waste all
that negative energy
on mere comic books?"

sonoda-san..so
naive, so innocent, so...
impressionable...

Posted by: samhain May 26 2004, 12:05 PM
command circumstance,
guiding Yuki's jealousy,
to control his world.

Posted by: masamage May 26 2004, 12:39 PM
[meta-ish]
Masa stares at her
Monitor a moment...and,
Slowly, she explodes.
[/meta]

Posted by: Nebulious May 26 2004, 12:40 PM
Bitter jealousy
Slanted judgment leads Yuki
To harsh conclusions

Drowning sorrow
She's taking book after book
I think that's enough

[/haiku]I'm really resisting the urge to do a "grief leads to anger, anger leads to hatred, hatred leads to darkness thing..."[haiku]

Posted by: killmoms May 26 2004, 12:55 PM
[irish haiku]
It seems even schoolgirls fifteen
Are unsafe from Miho's quite keen
Love of manipulation,
And emotional consternation—
Commodities she's not loathe to deign.
[/irish haiku]

Printed pages bring
An outlet insufficient—
At least for Miho.

What trickery is afoot
In this innocent bookshop?

--Cless

Posted by: ChibiChibi May 26 2004, 01:31 PM
Fantasy abound
Could not drown her anger
"So try something else..."

Will her curiosity raised
be enough for 3vil plots?

Posted by: snark May 26 2004, 06:17 PM
Disillusionment
Plus angst equals vitriol
Even from Yuki

[irish haiku]
A penchant for drawing conclusions,
Combined with her feelings profusion;
Will this new emotion,
From ash of devotion,
Drive her into unwise collusions?
[/irish haiku]

Posted by: DCR May 26 2004, 07:52 PM
I just sit and stare
Wondering where loyalties
Of mine shall belong

Erika Hayasaka
Was first and shall remain so



She's driving a wedge
Not a personal attack
Hell by proxy

Nothing against Erika
But everything against them

Posted by: Shoka May 27 2004, 12:12 AM
QUOTE (snark @ May 26 2004, 05:17 PM)
[irish haiku]
A penchant for drawing conclusions,
Combined with her feelings profusion;
Will this new emotion,
From ash of devotion,
Drive her into unwise collusions?
[/irish haiku]

biggrin.gif

[irish_haiku]
I've seen schoolgirls who act a bit cuckoo,
And an ex-idol's frown that could spook you,
But I must double check,
'Cuz I did not expect
Mephistopheles wearing a fuku.
[/irish_haiku]

Posted by: Chun May 27 2004, 12:21 AM
Yuki Frustration
Her own Feelings Influence
A New Side To Her

---------

Browsing the Manga
The Darkly Cute One Appears
And Mihoists Cheer

Side Note: Those that were involved in the metarenga, could you please check out the site? I updated it, and if you could, sign the guestbook. Other poets and curious members alike could also.

~Chun

Posted by: AncestralHamster May 27 2004, 12:59 AM
[3-5-3]

Fires rage
sparked by jealousy.
Hate kindled.

[/!3-5-3]

QUOTE (Shoka @ May 27 2004, 06:12 AM)
Mephistopheles wearing a fuku.

[!haiku] Heh! Good one, Not-Penguin-san! [/!haiku]

Posted by: snark May 27 2004, 05:23 AM
QUOTE (Shoka @ May 27 2004, 06:12 AM)
[irish_haiku]
I've seen schoolgirls who act a bit cuckoo,
And an ex-idol's frown that could spook you,
But I must double check,
'Cuz I did not expect
Mephistopheles wearing a fuku.
[/irish_haiku]

[irish haiku]
With your curious eyes on the scene,
Is there some extra nous you can glean?
That one of them's evil,
Is mostly believe'ble,
But which of these two girls do you mean?
[/irish haiku]

Posted by: killmoms May 27 2004, 07:18 AM
QUOTE (snark @ May 27 2004, 07:23 AM)
[irish haiku]
With your curious eyes on the scene,
Is there some extra nous you can glean?
That one of them's evil,
Is mostly believe'ble,
But which of these two girls do you mean?
[/irish haiku]

[irish haiku]
I can't believe you'd suspect Yuki
Capable of evil—and though kooky,
Miho's just misguided
By emotions divided
'Tween revenge and channeling spooky.
[/irish haiku]

[!haiku]Shoka still schools me at this, but I'd like to think I'm getting better.[/!haiku]

--Cless

Posted by: DCR May 27 2004, 01:03 PM
QUOTE (AncestralHamster @ May 26 2004, 11:59 PM)
[3-5-3]

Fires rage
sparked by jealousy.
Hate kindled.

[/!3-5-3]

[5-5]
Instigator makes
Inferno from flame
[/5-5]

Posted by: AncestralHamster May 27 2004, 07:59 PM
QUOTE (DCR @ May 27 2004, 07:03 PM)
[5-5]
Instigator makes
Inferno from flame
[/5-5]

[3-5-3]
Summer winds
fan the flames higher.
Wicked words.
[/3-5-3]

Posted by: masamage May 27 2004, 09:10 PM
Autumn (with its chill)
Tempts the elements further...
Calls down bitter snow.

Posted by: DCR May 29 2004, 06:21 PM
QUOTE (AncestralHamster @ May 27 2004, 06:59 PM)
[3-5-3]
Summer winds
fan the flames higher.
Wicked words.
[/3-5-3]

Fun to play with fire -
But beware backdrafts...

Posted by: DCR Jun 1 2004, 01:10 AM
QUOTE (DCR @ May 29 2004, 05:21 PM)
Fun to play with fire -
But beware backdrafts...

[3-5-3]
Miho's a
Pyromaniac
Dangerous
[/3-5-3]


[no new strip for two regularly scheduled days haiku]
Need a haiku fix
Bumping's better than nothing
Else no double post
[/whine]

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