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Posted by: DCR May 17 2004, 11:01 PM
Perfect portrayal:
Painful process producing
Protagonist part

Posted by: snark May 17 2004, 11:06 PM
Player perspective
Prompts preference proclamation
Pity's production

Posted by: DCR May 17 2004, 11:56 PM
Producer puts punt
Upon planned path producing
Poor players' problems

Ad-libbed assonance
Awful alliteration
An apology

Posted by: Shoka May 18 2004, 12:22 AM
[irish_haiku]
Our Kimiko seems to deplore
This scene, for Kotone feels sore;
The emotions aren't real,
And it cheapens the feel,
If he touches the girl just to score.
[/irish_haiku]

Posted by: Nebulious May 18 2004, 03:38 AM
Emotions cannot
Be decieved or exploited
Blind fantasies die

We've seen the terrors
These 'players' consume idols
Yet still she defends

Posted by: samhain May 18 2004, 03:48 AM
The cute squeeky girl
That Nanasawa ousted
Would follow the script

Please stop complaining
You like Kimiko really
Her outtakes are great happy.gif

Posted by: snark May 18 2004, 04:10 AM
Meeting a fanboy
Gives a better perspective
On escapism

Is she doing it "for him"
Or to do her job better?

Posted by: 1n50mn14c May 18 2004, 08:45 AM
the players are real
and so are their emotions
treat them with respect

Posted by: DCR May 18 2004, 09:23 AM
"SGD" haiku
Mercifully came to end
Fun while it lasted


Authenticity
Holds precidence over ease
Ensuring conflict

Posted by: snark May 18 2004, 06:05 PM
QUOTE (DCR @ May 18 2004, 03:23 PM)
"SGD" haiku
Mercifully came to end
Fun while it lasted

I don't think a trend was set
Merely me poem-pilfering
happy.gif

[irish haiku]
I hate to burst Matsui's bubble,
Kimiko is not that much trouble,
If she squeeks upon call,
But does not think at all,
Their problems would likely be double!

I don't think the game would be better,
If the script is revered to the letter,
Scenes would be rather rude,
An excuse for pics (nude),
No love, players just try to "get 'er!"
[/irish haiku]

Posted by: masamage May 18 2004, 07:55 PM
[rhyming tanka]
He's chasing a lay,
Interrupting her healing...
And she just gives way
To him, 'stead of concealing!
It mocks the things they're feeling.
[/rhyming]

Posted by: DCR May 18 2004, 09:47 PM
QUOTE (snark @ May 18 2004, 05:05 PM)
I don't think a trend was set
Merely me poem-pilfering

No trend did I set
No feeling of pride I met
Just pangs of regret

"If Dom did haiku"
My poems I should redo
And start over new



[!haiku] No problems phrom pilfering. Ok, that's enough. I started thread with joke of haiku, reread what I posted, decided that it was practically a SGD haiku pain-wise, and was going to put something else (better?) up, and there was already a follow-up post. In the style I started. Better than mine, and with more 'p'unch to it. So much for hiding that public lapse of sanity. But thank you for not leaving me alone in the sillyness, even though SGDCR haiku causes (me) pain. [/!haiku]

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