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Posted by: DCR May 10 2004, 12:03 AM
[3-5-3]
"Just like that..."
Heartbreaking request
Loss of hope
[/3-5-3]

Trouble all around
She's still thinking of others
Erika's awesome

Posted by: Chun May 10 2004, 12:05 AM
Chivelrous Piro
A Single Fanboy Helps Her
The Boss Relaxes

~Chun

Posted by: Shoka May 10 2004, 01:18 AM
[irish_haiku]
The Artist of Angst volunteers
To disperse the mob Erika fears;
No doubt he will show
Pics of "sad girls in snow",
And reduce them to fanboyish tears.

I don't think it is pain that I'm feeling,
As I lay back and stare at the ceiling,
And yet after the trip
That followed that kick,
I believe I'm in need of some healing.
[/irish_haiku]

Posted by: Garran May 10 2004, 03:54 AM
Yanagisawa,
Jagged voiced, does not think his
Own wounds most pressing.

Posted by: Garran May 10 2004, 03:59 AM
That gentle old fool
I'm sorry to have hurt him
Again. (But he won't

Blame me.) A quiet
Interlude: kind, shy eyes, for
Which I'm no less trapped.

Posted by: nekobawt May 10 2004, 04:50 AM
butterfly at rest...
but does she rest in what is
the eye of the storm?

can't be helped, i guess.
people WILL insist that the
stars belong to them.

"just like that," she sighs...
(does he think it's that easy?)
"oi! boss! you ok?"

Posted by: macloud May 10 2004, 06:46 AM

just like that she says,
an impossible daydream,
from reality

[okey its my first attempt - so sue me dry.gif ]


"make them all go away",
a gallant promise but yet,
one doomed to fail

a peacefull ceiling,
a quiet escape from the
chaos of outside

[and ill cut my losses here]

Posted by: DCR May 10 2004, 08:52 AM
["please stay" tanka]
No loss to haiku
I once thought the way you do
But I'm here to stay
Hotel Haiku similar
To Hotel California
[/tanka]
wink.gif


Suppressing fanboy
Piro offers assistance
Smile for kind gesture

Posted by: 1n50mn14c May 10 2004, 09:13 AM
offering some help
he'll do whatever he can
for the ex-idol

the boss has been hit!
perhaps he needs assistance
"the ceiling's peaceful..."

Posted by: snark May 10 2004, 04:17 PM
Sharks not easily
Dispersed once they can detect
Blood in the water

Posted by: AncestralHamster May 10 2004, 07:52 PM
QUOTE (DCR @ May 10 2004, 06:03 AM)
[3-5-3]
"Just like that..."
Heartbreaking request
Loss of hope
[/3-5-3]

[5-5]
You mean well, dear child,
but there's no quick fix.


[3-5-3]
The ice melts
from a warm gesture.
A slight smile.
[/3-5-3]

QUOTE (snark @ May 10 2004, 10:17 PM)
Sharks not easily
Dispersed once they can detect
Blood in the water

Supply another food source,
or let them eat each other.

Posted by: snark May 10 2004, 08:17 PM
QUOTE (AncestralHamster @ May 11 2004, 01:52 AM)
[5-5]
You mean well, dear child,
but there's no quick fix.

[/5-5]

[3-5-3]
The ice melts
from a warm gesture.
A slight smile.
[/3-5-3]

[5-5]
Smile there, but rueful
Thinking "If only..."
[/5-5]

QUOTE (AncestralHamster @ May 11 2004, 01:52 AM)
Supply another food source,
or let them eat each other.

Providing food source
Will only encourage them
Solution hidden

Posted by: AncestralHamster May 10 2004, 08:28 PM
QUOTE (snark @ May 11 2004, 02:17 AM)
[5-5]
Smile there, but rueful
Thinking "If only..."
[/5-5]

[3-5-3]
Rueful, yes,
but a needed pause,
after shocks.
[/3-5-3]

QUOTE (snark @ May 11 2004, 02:17 AM)

Providing food source
Will only encourage them
Solution hidden

While they turn on each other,
Simply sail for safer shores.

Posted by: snark May 10 2004, 10:55 PM
QUOTE (AncestralHamster @ May 11 2004, 02:28 AM)
While they turn on each other,
Simply sail for safer shores.

After the winds change
Sailing away takes one to
Uncertain landing

Posted by: DCR May 10 2004, 11:46 PM
QUOTE (snark)
After the winds change
Sailing away takes one to
Uncertain landing

They say any port in storm
Hurricane Fanboy brewing

Posted by: snark May 11 2004, 07:49 PM
QUOTE (DCR @ May 11 2004, 05:46 AM)
They say any port in storm
Hurricane Fanboy brewing

Even mighty rocks
Will be slowly worn down by
The ocean's power

Pliant reed will bend, not break
When buffeted by the wind

Posted by: Rare_heroine May 11 2004, 08:43 PM
Familiar ceiling
Boss-san stares a hole in it
how very Eva

Idol laments excess love
The Asuka here is meek.

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