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Megatokyo Forums > Story Discussions > Haiku: [0552] When She's Bad, She's Really Bad


Posted by: AncestralHamster Apr 29 2004, 01:39 AM
Asmo delighted:
Eager anticipation
of future mischief.


Posted by: DCR Apr 29 2004, 02:01 AM
QUOTE (AncestralHamster)
Asmo delighted:
Eager anticipation
of future mischief.


First Largo needs attention
Docs send Erika 'Thank You's

Posted by: Nebulious Apr 29 2004, 03:36 AM
[Irish haiku]
A rodent has never been so sad
To learn dear Sera is really that bad.
Bat boy gives him a smirk,
(He can be a real jerk!)
Cheer up, 'bad girl' may just be a fad!
[/Irish haiku]

Consciences enforce
Both the Ying and Yang of mind
Pandora's Box breached

Posted by: adamjaskie Apr 29 2004, 10:38 AM
There is a problem with your "Irish haiku". It is lacking one thing that makes a limerick funny. Crude humour. Remember,

QUOTE
A Limerick gets laughs anatomical
Into space that is quite economical.
But the good ones I've seen
So seldom are clean,
And the clean ones so seldom are comical.

Posted by: DCR Apr 29 2004, 11:58 AM
QUOTE (adamjaskie @ Apr 29 2004, 09:38 AM)
There is a problem with your "Irish haiku".

Said easy
But actions lacking
Where's your rhyme
[/3-5-3]


History repeats
The uninformed it defeats
Old news Boo now meets

Posted by: Godefridus Apr 29 2004, 12:07 PM
[Irish]
Asmodeus plans for a date,
And Boo just now learned that he's late.
Poor Sera's gone evil,
and Largo's upheaval,
Means the next strip better not wait!
[/Irish]

Posted by: Nebulious Apr 29 2004, 02:35 PM
QUOTE (adamjaskie @ Apr 29 2004, 10:38 AM)
There is a problem with your "Irish haiku". It is lacking one thing that makes a limerick funny. Crude humour. Remember,


[Irish Haiku]
Now please hold back your criticism.
There is by no means limmerick schism.
In this certain fourm,
There's no concrete form.
It tends to demote individualism.

If you want to hear valgur shouts,
There's no better place to go but out
in http://forums.megatokyo.com/index.php?showforum=1 its less placid.
In fact, nothings sacred.
And there's always a n00b bashing bout!
[/Irish Haiku]

Now back on topic.
Evil, fanservacy gal
Caught us all off guard.

Posted by: snark Apr 29 2004, 04:37 PM
[irish haiku]
"Hey, Seraphim's running away!
What's going on?" her fans say,
I could have fun,
With an ecchi-type pun,
But that would be rather risque.
[/irish haiku]

QUOTE (adamjaskie @ Apr 29 2004, 04:38 PM)
There is a problem with your "Irish haiku". It is lacking one thing that makes a limerick funny. Crude humour. Remember,
QUOTE
A Limerick gets laughs anatomical
Into space that is quite economical.
But the good ones I've seen
So seldom are clean,
And the clean ones so seldom are comical.

[!haiku]I think you've misinterpreted this limerick. The author seems to be saying that good limericks will produce hearty belly-laughs ("laughs anatomical", ie not just with the voice), but lamenting that too many good limericks are also lewd. So there tongue.gif [/!haiku]

Posted by: kage musouka Apr 29 2004, 08:56 PM
QUOTE (Nebulious @ Apr 29 2004, 02:35 PM)
Now back on topic.
Evil, fanservacy gal
Caught us all off guard.

When the good angel fails us
Now the bad must take up slack.

Posted by: adamjaskie Apr 29 2004, 10:18 PM
QUOTE (snark @ Apr 29 2004, 04:37 PM)
[!haiku]I think you've misinterpreted this limerick. The author seems to be saying that good limericks will produce hearty belly-laughs ("laughs anatomical", ie not just with the voice), but lamenting that too many good limericks are also lewd. So there tongue.gif [/!haiku]

I do not think I
Misinterpreted at all,
As I was looking

At the second half
Of the limerick you see,
His was quite un-lewd.

Posted by: snark Apr 29 2004, 10:23 PM
QUOTE (kage musouka @ Apr 30 2004, 02:56 AM)
When the good angel fails us
Now the bad must take up slack.

But can they trust him?
Seeing as he's far more prone
To be slacking off.

Posted by: DCR Apr 29 2004, 11:37 PM
QUOTE (snark @ Apr 29 2004, 09:23 PM)
But can they trust him?
Seeing as he's far more prone
To be slacking off.

Those who trust Asmodeus
Will build castles in the air

It is good to see
However different they be
The consciences three

Posted by: Shoka Apr 30 2004, 02:07 AM
[irish_haiku]
Seraphim's black leather jacket,
Reminds me of Jessica Rabbit:
"I am not really bad,
"I'm just drawn that way, lad!"
Here's hoping this look becomes habit!;)
[/irish_haiku]

Posted by: snark Apr 30 2004, 03:07 AM
QUOTE (Shoka @ Apr 30 2004, 08:07 AM)
[irish_haiku]
Seraphim's black leather jacket,
Reminds me of Jessica Rabbit:
"I am not really bad,
"I'm just drawn that way, lad!"
Here's hoping this look becomes habit!;)
[/irish_haiku]

[irish haiku]
If I pause a moment and stew,
(I mean "cogitate" it is true),
I think I may state,
That, as of late,
We have missed our irish haiku.
[/irish haiku]

Posted by: Nebulious Apr 30 2004, 03:42 AM
QUOTE (DCR @ Apr 29 2004, 11:37 PM)
Those who trust Asmodeus
Will build castles in the air

Assumed they finish
Before forced change of address
New home: Funny Farm

Posted by: kage musouka Apr 30 2004, 04:42 PM
QUOTE (Orophin @ Apr 30 2004, 07:09 AM)
so whats this current fetish on MT with badness, pain and stuff on the darkside....

so she has a mischeivious past....*sigh*!! dry.gif

anyways, i'll see where this goes!!! i like MT, been reading since 2001...but its gotten abit annoying for me these past few strips....well, not the actuall strips themselves, but the resulting disscussions in these forums. Some very banal commentaries bourne from blind fanaticism. dry.gif


Keep it going Fred!  happy.gif




[edit] first page...woot!!  biggrin.gif

"Enough mindless fanboys" he pled,
"w00t, The 1st page!" he said.
D'ya realize
Thar aint no prize
Posting to the wrong thread instead?
[/irish haiku ---I think....??]

Posted by: masamage Apr 30 2004, 05:33 PM
Bad little angel...
The short-hair look suits her, too
This oughtta be good

(Funny, though, thinks Boo...
She sure seems to hate this guy.
He may be smug, but
Even in her wilder days
She thought he was a loser.)

Posted by: Orophin May 1 2004, 02:44 PM
QUOTE (kage musouka @ Apr 30 2004, 10:42 PM)
"Enough mindless fanboys" he pled,
"w00t, The 1st page!" he said.
D'ya realize
Thar aint no prize
Posting to the wrong thread instead?
[/irish haiku ---I think....??]

Mistake seen
Appologies made
Honored he is....
Cute face avatar qoute him happy.gif

Posted by: DCR May 1 2004, 03:00 PM
[3-5-3]
Good lil' girls
Can make some mighty
Wild women
[/3-5-3]

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