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Posted by: Caduceuskun Jan 28 2004, 02:52 AM
[!haiku edit] Okay, I officially hate these forums. I forgot the haiku tag, I can't edit titles and I can't delete first posts. This sucks.

Further edit: w00t! Thanks, Char![!haiku]

Tonight, confusing
Conversations will come one
After another.

Brief transformation
His avatar's backbone shows
Then conscience scares it.

Posted by: Opt498 Jan 28 2004, 02:57 AM
Sudden change of heart
A little voice breaks his resolve--
Haibane's wing dye?

[!haiku] Don't worry about it, man. I'm sure the mods will notice, and they all know what the haiku thread is supposed to be called. [/!haiku]

Posted by: snark Jan 28 2004, 03:03 AM
Two conversations,
One by phone, one with conscience.
Seraphim? Or not?

Posted by: Shoka Jan 28 2004, 03:09 AM
as piro grapples
with his thoughts, look who is back:
jimminy cricket!

[irish_haiku]
Piro's finding the goth girl pretentious,
His internal debate seems contentious:
"We can't figure out
"What these girlz are about,
"They confuses us, yes! - don't they precious?!"
[/irish_haiku]

Posted by: moravia Jan 28 2004, 03:19 AM
[irish]
All day missing your voice,
all day without advice...
At last I can rejoice,
your presence will suffice.

If this is a disguise,
to bungle up my choice,
it is a vile devise!
[/irish]

Posted by: Rowan Bristol Jan 28 2004, 07:06 AM
the game is renewed
confusing and constricting
stop; take a moment

Posted by: phaedrus Jan 28 2004, 08:45 AM
Changeful like the moon
"Meet girls!" then "Is she worth it?"
What is this new phase?

[irish haiku]
His conscience would hate to admit
that her story has changed quite a bit.
"Go find a non-teen!"
becomes "What does she mean?"
Or is Sera a Devil's Advocate?
[/irish haiku]

Posted by: phaedrus Jan 28 2004, 09:57 AM
Forgive a double post, but I haven't beat this metaphor into the ground yet. happy.gif

Changing like the moon,
Venus is mercurial.
Living in Girl Phase.

Posted by: Char Jan 28 2004, 10:07 AM
Thread title edited~

Posted by: XkyRauh Jan 28 2004, 11:36 AM
[irish haiku?]

In a flurry of emotional torque,
Miho makes Piro a dork.
His train of thought gone,
"What's going on!?"
Somebody stick him with a fork! ((he's done... stick a fork in him... haha))


Miho plays on with a pout,
while Piro's mind slowly gives out.
She's baited it all,
he cannot recall,
the lesson he's forgot about!


--Xky *waving Mami flag playfully*

Posted by: JRandomLurker Jan 28 2004, 01:09 PM
a condemnation,
cynical misdirection;
angel of dead hope


[!haiku]Whee, bitter. Seraphim, being as she is at least partially a product of Piro's thoughts, really pissed me off today.[/!haiku]

Posted by: praetorfenix69 Jan 28 2004, 01:18 PM
we feared death
but Sera returns
yet unscathed

Piro thinks
pondering the day
wondering...

[!haiku]I'm not much of a writer obviously ^^;;[/!haiku]

Posted by: Mintaka Jan 29 2004, 05:27 AM
As darkness beckons,
Wingbeats' whisper is chilly --
Mystery's shadow.

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