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Megatokyo Forums > Story Discussions > Haiku [499]: Falling Down

Posted by: phaedrus Dec 17 2003, 06:51 AM
In battle's tumult
time pauses, frozen at cusp.
Her one thought: Oh shit.

[irish haiku]
In the battle twix evil and l33t,
the outcome's not tidy or neat.
His attack goes astray -
karmic rodent ricochet!
Harming Sera, who's tied to her seat.
[/irish haiku]

Posted by: killmoms Dec 17 2003, 07:18 AM
Wow. That first one was so good, I'm tempted not to post anything at all, but I will anyway.

[Irish haiku]
Boo's plan has gone slightly astray,
And a big box is falling her way!
Sera curses gravity,
(Physics lesson for free!)
This really just isn't her day.
[/Irish haiku]


Posted by: Darkness087 Dec 17 2003, 06:55 PM
In vengeful defense
One problem is overlooked...
Poor Sera is screwed.

(Yeah, not my best work, but there wasn't that much to work with today...^^;;;)

Posted by: Opt498 Dec 17 2003, 07:00 PM
[!haiku] It is a good day for the Irish form, yes... Those limericks are of the rock. [/!haiku]

Posted by: claytonian Dec 17 2003, 07:50 PM
I wrote three lines
and by the time I got to the end,
you probably realized it was not a haiku

Posted by: Echo Dec 19 2003, 09:03 PM
In battle, all the
best laid plans of mice and men
don't cover angels...

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