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Posted by: AncestralHamster Oct 17 2003, 12:29 PM
http://filespace.brentdax.com/nom_de_plume/mtsdintro.html#2

Edit: C & C would be appreciated.
His hat ... His glasses ...

In his excitement at seeing her he has forgotten them. Forgotten me.

He's talking to her: he never talks to me. When he does, he's usually impatient or annoyed. He's not annoyed with her.

She made him happy, I can hear it in his voice. I can't make him happy. I don't know how to make him happy. Yet she knows how to make him happy. I wish I could make him happy, but I can't

All I can do for him is hold the things he's forgotten, the things he's left behind.

Things like me.

Posted by: Opt498 Oct 17 2003, 02:00 PM
Sugoi, Hamster-san. Just the kind of thing to make a Pingfan wish there were some male Piroists to beat up on. (After all, we can't have people attacking the cutegirl Piroists, can we?)

Posted by: odette Oct 17 2003, 04:23 PM
Aw... So sweet... and so sad. Very well done!

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