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Megatokyo Forums > Story Discussions > haiku [475]: I liked yours better...


Posted by: Rowan Bristol Oct 17 2003, 09:33 AM
autumnal color
enhanced by a gift of grey
winter will be cold.

Posted by: XkyRauh Oct 17 2003, 10:27 AM
[ haiku? ]

looming suspicion:
maybe calm before the storm?
no--just forum talk :-)

a friendly gesture
is often simple kindness
and nothing deeper ...*shot*

[ irish haiku? ]

in 'rejection mode' Ping is a sight,
making fanboys' eyes shine with delight,
but in rampages past,
she beat Largo-san's ass,
is Kimiko her target tonight? (( probably not ))


--Xky

Posted by: Voided_Angel Oct 17 2003, 10:35 AM
falls leaves
passing a present of choice
springs warmth is coming

Posted by: Shoka Oct 17 2003, 11:35 AM
In reply to:

autumnal color
enhanced by a gift of grey
winter will be cold.


[renga]
the last leaf spirals downward,
and the branch has been laid bare.
[/renga]

[irish_haiku]
The sketch of a sad girl brought here
By Kimiko gave Piro cheer;
Do you think he would care,
If he were aware
Of the sad girl who’s standing so near?
[/irish_haiku]

Posted by: Opt498 Oct 17 2003, 11:47 AM
So many verse threads
Let us excersize some care
Lest the mods take over

Posted by: Aree Oct 17 2003, 02:03 PM
Ping is all alone.
Poor, Poor Little Robot girl.
Don't cry. Wasted Sadness.

Posted by: Disco Pete Oct 17 2003, 09:04 PM
Smiling Kimiko
always a Waiful event
but at what expense?

Ping-chan is near tears
forgotten, left in the dust
makes you want to cry

She likes yours better
but I don't think it's your skill
She likes you Piro!
Which thread to post in?
Haiku thread is popular
but this is Two much!

Posted by: //\\//\\iho-san Oct 17 2003, 11:12 PM
would Piro feel bad,
in other words 'sad',
if Ping started to cry?

Would Ping say he was rude,
and kick his ass good,
if he reset her or even did try
----------------------------
With Piro's glasses and hat,
Ping tells herself that,
it could never be,

Then she takes his items away,
and then cries all day,
thinking "why did anyone ever program me?"
----------------------------
kinda bad, but I guess it's ok right now..

Posted by: O.P. Oct 18 2003, 12:22 AM
Hand grasps the glasses
Ears bring news of gift giving
Heart of steel may break

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