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|Megatokyo Forums > Story Discussions > Haiku:  no less dangerous|
|Posted by: AncestralHamster Sep 19 2003, 05:32 AM|
| Tending Piro's wound:
Gently flirting Kimiko.
A kindly charmer
has given a fair warning.
His heart in danger.
|Posted by: Shoka Sep 19 2003, 06:44 AM|
The girl said "This robot you keep,
"Like a real girl, can cause you to bleed."
But dear, that ain't true,
Though your statement is shrewd -
While you may not cut wide, you cut deep.
|Posted by: Temenus Sep 19 2003, 07:13 AM|
| Like the sun peeking
From behind clouds of concern
A coy smile is seen
Unknown strength resides
In arms of genki schoolgirl
Is she dangerous?
In the woman's hands
A gently applied tissue
|Posted by: Rowan Bristol Sep 19 2003, 09:51 AM|
| reckless thunderstorm
amidst the savage tumult
a moment of calm
|Posted by: Hammerstrike Sep 19 2003, 05:28 PM|
| Small slice not with knife
Crimson trace trickles downwards
Glasses no-where found
Tender loving care
Administered by a girl
Who deals much more pain
Android seeks aide
Follows her natural code
Does not know her strength
|Posted by: kitty_joe Sep 19 2003, 05:42 PM|
| Ping, go get bandage,
It's grown up talking time now,
Piro and Kimi.
((Bleurgh, shortening someones name to make a Haiku is not a good idea!))
|Posted by: AncestralHamster Sep 20 2003, 05:25 AM|
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Mmm ... unique perspective and imagery. Very well done, Temenus!