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Megatokyo Forums > Story Discussions > Haiku: [0463] no less dangerous


Posted by: AncestralHamster Sep 19 2003, 05:32 AM
Tending Piro's wound:
Gently flirting Kimiko.
Sly observation.

A kindly charmer
has given a fair warning.
His heart in danger.

Posted by: Shoka Sep 19 2003, 06:44 AM
[irish_haiku]
The girl said "This robot you keep,
"Like a real girl, can cause you to bleed."
But dear, that ain't true,
Though your statement is shrewd -
While you may not cut wide, you cut deep.
[/irish_haiku]

Posted by: Temenus Sep 19 2003, 07:13 AM
Like the sun peeking
From behind clouds of concern
A coy smile is seen

Unknown strength resides
In arms of genki schoolgirl
Is she dangerous?

In the woman's hands
A gently applied tissue
Erases bookcase

/Temenus

Posted by: Rowan Bristol Sep 19 2003, 09:51 AM
reckless thunderstorm
amidst the savage tumult
a moment of calm

Posted by: Hammerstrike Sep 19 2003, 05:28 PM
Small slice not with knife
Crimson trace trickles downwards
Glasses no-where found

Tender loving care
Administered by a girl
Who deals much more pain

Android seeks aide
Follows her natural code
Does not know her strength



Posted by: kitty_joe Sep 19 2003, 05:42 PM
Ping, go get bandage,
It's grown up talking time now,
Piro and Kimi.

((Bleurgh, shortening someones name to make a Haiku is not a good idea!))

Posted by: AncestralHamster Sep 20 2003, 05:25 AM
In reply to:

In the woman's hands
A gently applied tissue
Erases bookcase


[!haiku]
Mmm ... unique perspective and imagery. Very well done, Temenus!
[/!haiku]

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