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Posted by: Rowan Bristol Sep 5 2003, 07:02 AM
A wounded sparrow
It's now time to scold the cat
When did he get pink?!?

[Edit] Edited for bonehead mistake [/Edit]

Posted by: st34lth Sep 5 2003, 08:08 AM
bottom line is 6 syll...

Posted by: Go Takarada Sep 5 2003, 09:05 AM
Erika walks out
Yuki's friends threaten Piro
Asako giggles

Posted by: elyscape Sep 5 2003, 05:19 PM
Piro's in trouble
He's might accidentally
Hurt Yuki's feelings

Posted by: XkyRauh Sep 5 2003, 05:38 PM
Yuki is not here--
we learn more about her friends
and how they behave.

Mami draws the line--
"Our friend is not to be hurt!"
she lets Piro know.

Asako's there too--
bubbly, mimicking, watching
she cannot be stern!

new developments
refine old character views
and help us learn more.


--Xky *waving Mami flag*

Posted by: seyosama Sep 5 2003, 11:11 PM
Estrogen rising,
Male cornered by two alphas.
Pink bunny suit, faux pas.

Posted by: Disco Pete Sep 5 2003, 11:43 PM
Teen girls see Piro
Anger fails to burn brightly
Pink teddy is cute

PH33R MY B4D H41KUZ!!!

Posted by: seyosama Sep 5 2003, 11:46 PM
/me ph34rz n0+ j00r h41kuz.
They are not evil. happy.gif

Posted by: Shoka Sep 6 2003, 05:34 AM
In reply to:

A wounded sparrow
It's now time to scold the cat
When did he get pink?!?


[renga]
a furry feline gets pink
when he has had a close shave!
[renga]

[irish_haiku]
Because Yuki is down in the dumps
Her two school-chums decide to get tough,
"If you injure our friend,"
Says Mami, "Why then,"
"Asako and me will get rough!"

This comic has made me unsteady,
With a sight for which I'm not ready:
Is there someone here please,
Who could kindly tell me
Why our hero is wearing a teddy?
[/irish_haiku]

Posted by: EarthStarFan Sep 6 2003, 08:27 AM
You should have known more
Don't tangle with school-age girls;
They can be viscious.

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