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Posted by: Opt498 Sep 3 2003, 03:44 AM
[irish haiku]
Angsty Yuki droops once more
Wondering who Piro's in town for,
But what happens after
Her pals let out their laughter
At the outfit the poor boy has wore?
[/irish haiku]

Posted by: Go Takarada Sep 3 2003, 03:57 AM
/me blinks.

Jealousy fills me
Other people with more skill
I bow down. You rock!

Posted by: Shoka Sep 3 2003, 04:13 AM
thunder clouds gather
in front of the sales counter:
piro's "fans" are here!

The outfit poor Piro must wear
Is the least of his worries, for there
Are a couple of friends
Of a girl who intend
To speak, and they're loaded for bear!

Posted by: seyosama Sep 3 2003, 08:45 AM
Hey Mr. Piro, look!
You can't run away from them,
Face your fears, jingai~!

The truth of the matter is thus,
Mr. Piro is truly a putz:
When a woman comes near,
He attempts to stear clear,
But eventually ends flat on his butz.

What else could a guy dream for?
Two schoolgirls that came to his store!
While they might come in spite,
bling bling, it'll be right
And end up with +2, that's four! [1]


[!haiku] [1] 2 women (Kimiko, Yuki) + the other two.

Posted by: Rowan Bristol Sep 3 2003, 10:26 AM
Alone and hurting
sakura blossom falling
we won't let you die

Posted by: ShinRyoji Sep 3 2003, 10:29 AM
what the heck, hey dudes
what's going on in this thread
a simple haiku

Posted by: AncestralHamster Sep 3 2003, 01:11 PM
His girlfriend's cell phone.
Yuki's misapprehension
leads to depression.

Mami and Asako:
Our friend is hurting.
A boy is responsible.
We will set things right.

More girls to see Piro:
It's his little
Now what has he done?

Rowan Bristol:
In reply to:

Alone and hurting
sakura blossom falling
we won't let you die

[!haiku] Ah! Breathtaking, Rowan! [!/haiku]

Petals scattered by the wind.
Awakened passions blighted.

ShinRyoji: [!haiku] [!/haiku]

Posted by: XkyRauh Sep 3 2003, 04:44 PM
Mami leads the way
Asako follows behind
A brand new sub-plot!

--Xky *waving Mami flag*

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