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Posted by: Opt498 Aug 10 2003, 11:28 PM
Miss Kimiko falls.
Metagaming is not good.
Don't let the joy show.

Posted by: AncestralHamster Aug 11 2003, 12:25 AM
[4-6-4]
I am at work
but my heart is with him.
Oh, happy thoughts!
[/4-6-4]

How can I be sad
when I know he thinks of me?
My heart rejoices!

No sad girl in snow.
Happy girl in studio.
Angry producer.

Posted by: Crazylou Aug 11 2003, 12:30 AM
Why can't I act sad?!
Baka-Piro will get me
Fired. Piro...*sigh*

Posted by: EarthStarFan Aug 11 2003, 01:01 AM
You need to be glad
Or sad, as the story needs--
That's why it's acting.

What blessed you before
Will come back to hurt you now--
Don't fall to yourself!

Posted by: killmoms Aug 11 2003, 05:38 AM
[Irish haiku]
In the studio, Kimiko's found
That she can't get that sad, wistful sound!
She's too happy, it seems;
And the producer's not keen
On the prospect of changing plans 'round.
[/Irish haiku]

Hmm, my rhyming skills need some work. I always get stuck because of a good idea for the first two lines and nothing for the last one. happy.gif;;

--Matt

Posted by: Integral Aug 11 2003, 07:28 AM
Her "acting" depends
On her emotional state.
Let's re-cast the role.

Posted by: Darkness087 Aug 11 2003, 10:41 AM
Wistful depression
Kimiko can't summon now
Oi, this won't end well...

Pull it together
Or you will find your sorrow
After you've been canned.

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Posted by: Opt498 Aug 11 2003, 10:42 AM
In reply to:

Her "acting" depends
On her emotional state.
Let's re-cast the role.



A very good idea,
But wouldn't Snow's goons riot?

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