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Posted by: Opt498 Aug 5 2003, 10:25 PM
[irish haiku]
Piro's mind is much dismayed,
With thoughts of Ping having been betrayed.
He's earned some kudos,
Since her real-ness he knows,
And he still isn't trying to get laid.
[/irish haiku]

It seems that Piro
May not be the scum we thought.
Alone, he sins not.

Posted by: AncestralHamster Aug 6 2003, 01:44 AM
More than a machine.
Miho's provocative words.
Reassessing Ping.

Happy with her friend,
Ignorant of what was said.
Innocence abused.
In reply to:

It seems that Piro
May not be the scum we thought.
Alone, he sins not.


Seeing her as more than a toy:
There may be hope for him yet.

Posted by: Rowan Bristol Aug 6 2003, 05:38 AM
I look at her smile
algorithmic cheerfulness
I can't break her heart.

In reply to:

Seeing her as more than a toy:
There may be hope for him yet.




A Sony RealDoll?
byproduct of fanboy lust?
No. Little Sister.

Posted by: Kawaii Catboy Aug 6 2003, 08:47 AM
See silly Piro
Worrying about Ping-Chan
All else forgotten

Ping, fully equipped?
Why should Miho care of that?
Mysteries abound...

Largo, running to home
With dread in his beating heart
and his empty head

Posted by: Opt498 Aug 6 2003, 10:49 AM
In reply to:

A Sony RealDoll?
byproduct of fanboy lust?
No. Little Sister.



Piro cares as a brother,
But is he responsible?

Posted by: AncestralHamster Aug 6 2003, 08:35 PM
Rowan Bristol:
In reply to:

A Sony RealDoll?
byproduct of fanboy lust?
No. Little Sister.


Family: more than blood kin.
The heart chooses its own ties.

[3-5-3 haiku speculation]
Ping as kin?
Too early for that.
But new thoughts ...
[/3-5-3 haiku speculation]


Opt498:
In reply to:

Piro cares as a brother,
But is he responsible?



No, Piro is not.
The boy is not yet a man.
This may mark a start.

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