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Posted by: Opt498 Jun 5 2003, 10:35 PM
So full of questions,
Asako turns up the heat.
Yuki won't answer.

[irish haiku]
Come fair, come foul, it's time that tells,
Who's on your side against fate's quills.
However, you see,
I think you'll agree,
Friends ownz you like nobody else.
[/irish haiku]

Posted by: EarthStarFan Jun 5 2003, 10:41 PM
Asako queries;
Yuki won't say what happened.
I know! Tug harder!

[irish haiku]
Whenever one's seeking a story
For interest, money, or glory,
Just take a hair plug
And give it a tug--
And if all else fails, try getting gory!
[/irish haiku]

Posted by: CountAlpicola Jun 5 2003, 10:58 PM
"If I pull her hair
I bet I can get her thoughts
To come falling out"

Mami sees the pain
Asako is inflicting
But stands and watches

[irish haiku]
Asako pulls on Yuki's hair
All Yuki wants is to get out of there
Too bad tricks won't work
Like on that Piro jerk
To catch Asako off guard, unaware
[/irish]

Posted by: Shoka Jun 5 2003, 11:18 PM
now yuki faces
torment beyond all reason:
asako's questions.

[irish_haiku]
"You vill tell us vot ve vant to know,"
Leers the agent of the gesta-po,
"You must know it's no use,
"You must tell us the truth!
"Or ve'll bring in dat cute Asa-ko!"
[/irish_haiku]

Posted by: Rowan Bristol Jun 6 2003, 12:02 AM
Alone and withdrawn
No need to share suffering
"Come on! Wanna See!"

Posted by: Sakusen Jun 6 2003, 03:36 AM
No details for you,
Despite all your persistence,
Leave my hair alone!

[Irish]
Yuki-chan down and defeated,
With an interrogation is greeted,
If her defenses should lapse,
Is she thinking perhaps,
An Erika moment is needed?
[/Irish]

*crack*

Posted by: Sati Jun 6 2003, 08:18 AM
[!haiku] It's too silly that Asako and gestapo rhyme. happy.gif[/!haiku]

~ Sati

Posted by: squ33k Jun 6 2003, 09:15 AM
Look out, Asako!
The tugging just enhances
Yuki's Look of Death

Posted by: Shdwcaster Jun 6 2003, 12:27 PM
Yuki-chan, tell us!
Tell us now about your night.
What's with your boyfriend?

Alas for poor Yuki
Even if she told the truth
They wouldn't believe.

[irish]
Have pity on Yuki,
her day's getting puky.
Why won't they believe,
why can't they just leave.
'T 'would be good, this day, to play hooky.

"I know! I'll pull on the hair of her pate!
Then she'll tell me all about her date!
But Piro's a dork,
He forgot her, of course,
And her night went "So sorry, so late."
[/irish]

Posted by: roguenine Jun 6 2003, 12:37 PM
meanwhile for Yuki
Mami continues tugging
like little sister

maybe tomorrow
Yuki will arrive in class
with much shortened hair

Posted by: Crin the sniper Jun 6 2003, 02:28 PM
Yuki won't answer
Asako tugs on her hair
she is still silent!

Posted by: EarthStarFan Jun 6 2003, 10:19 PM
roguenine, I've noticed
In this thread and another
You mistake two names.

Define Asako:
She's the one pulling pigtails
And asking questions.

Mami, however,
Is the one warning Yuki,
"She's just beginning."


Posted by: Disco Pete Jun 7 2003, 02:28 AM
[Irish Haiku]
This is a strip of Yuki fair,
today she has a long, sad stare,
a friend does persist,
“Tell us,” she insists,
and tug she does on Yuki’s hair.
[/Irish Haiku]

No tears does she shed
But her friends can tell she’s hurt
and they want answers.

Century of Posts
DP is now a Local
His next stop: Addict

[!Haiku]w00t! 100 posts! And it only took 3 months. L33t One, here I come![/!Haiku]

Posted by: roguenine Jun 7 2003, 12:06 PM
Well, jeez, EarthStarFan
It seems that you are correct
I apologize.

My mistake comes from
Lazyness that I need to fix
By checking the strips.

Posted by: Opt498 Jun 7 2003, 12:59 PM
Don't worry too much.
These things happen to us all.
Even l33t ones have erred.

Posted by: Izuko Jun 7 2003, 02:39 PM
Share with them your thoughts.
Persistant as they may be,
They are still your friends.

Posted by: Marak Jun 7 2003, 07:21 PM
At first it's tugging
But I know how this will go
It only gets worse

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