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Posted by: Opt498 May 30 2003, 01:25 AM
Are... Are you hungry?
Close, but not nearly enough.
Sneaky, and evil.

Angel feathers fly.
No flying pigs, what Boo sees
Is big, bad trouble.

Seraphim KOed,
It's easily imagined
That Piro will err.

Posted by: AncestralHamster May 30 2003, 01:34 AM
3-5-3
Seraphim:
By her virtue trapped.
Compassion.

Posted by: Ragnarok May 30 2003, 01:40 AM
Kind, kind Serephim,
With virtue and compassion,
A weakness is found.

A hungry kitten?
Could it be Asmodeus?
Will we ever know?

Sad, sad irony,
That such noble qualities,
Endanger her life.

Endanger it might,
But her spirit is strengthened
By Godly virtue.

Posted by: Manta_X May 30 2003, 01:59 AM
Kitty takes a bite,
But will it keep the snack down,
Feathers tickle throats.

Posted by: Shoka May 30 2003, 02:01 AM
[irish_haiku]
At Seraphim's impromptu romp,
The hamster looks thorougly tromped!
For she knelt, taking pity
On a poor little kitty
Who revived long enough to go chomp!
[/irish_haiku]

Posted by: nuvan May 30 2003, 02:04 AM
3-5-3
Flying Pigs
Are not what Boo sees
Kitty eats

5-7-5
Seraphim gives in
A moment of compassion
So that's her weakness

[Irish_Haiku]
Seraphim saw a poor cat,
Who's tummy was quite far from fat.
She offered it food,
That suited it's mood,
And it gobbled her up just like that!
[/Irish_Haiku]

Posted by: kezra_cor May 30 2003, 02:13 AM
Innocent angel
Her greatest weakness revealed
Compassion engulfed

Cunning deception
Lips curled in an evil smirk
Satisfied kitty

Staring in horror
Lost without his fair partner
Poor Boo is alone

Posted by: Rowan Bristol May 30 2003, 02:16 AM
my feathered savior
I cannot help what I am
A mouse is screaming


[!haiku]
Is it me, or does the cat smile like asmodeus?
[/!haiku]

Posted by: Opt498 May 30 2003, 02:19 AM
[irish haiku]
A companion, of the sexy sort,
Observes his boss, the worrywart,
She aids a sad kitty,
But it doesn't end pretty...
Perhaps now it's time to abort?
[/irish haiku]

Asmodeus'
Face envisioned in feline?
It could be. Who knows?

Posted by: AncestralHamster May 30 2003, 02:35 AM
By laptop betrayed,
Kind Seraphim is ensnared.
Devilish revenge.

Rowan has returned
gracing us with her haiku.
A most welcome sight.
In reply to:

[!haiku]
Is it me, or does the cat smile like asmodeus?
[/!haiku]


[!haiku] Oh, there's bit of the devil in that grin! [/!haiku]

Posted by: Disco Pete May 30 2003, 03:15 AM
Sera has been chomped
gone to the neko belly
kitty with heartburn

Posted by: Integral May 30 2003, 07:40 AM
Look, a cute kitty!
Kitty, what is the matter?
Oh no, don't eat me!

[irish]

Seraphim finds Largo insightful,
But Piro is in for an earful!
Wait, here's a cute kitty,
Seraphim has pity,
"Ack! Don't eat me! I'm not edible!"

[/irish]

Posted by: JAFanboy May 30 2003, 09:42 AM
Fear for Seraphim?
Hardly! For she has mad skillz
far beyond our ken.

It's Asmodeus
who should be worrying, ne?
Hot foot? Hot stomach!

Posted by: Crin the sniper May 30 2003, 09:53 AM
compassion is found
neko is very hungry
a furious Boo

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Posted by: CBongo May 30 2003, 12:45 PM
[!Haiku]First time poster, forgiveness is begged.[!/Haiku]

Asmo springs his trap.
Winged conscience sees "ill" cat
Becomes kitty's lunch.

Posted by: Opt498 May 30 2003, 12:48 PM
A first post haiku,
Another lurker revealed.
Welcome to SD.

Posted by: Shdwcaster May 30 2003, 02:19 PM
Cute kitty needs food.
Seraphim tries to be kind.
Now kitty is fed.

Largo, perceptive.
That's a frightening, odd thought.
Watch for flying pigs.

[irish]
Seraphim sees a poor kitty,
after noting that Largo seems witty.
But she sealed her fate,
on this bad dinner date,
On Piro, someone, please take pity!
[/irish]

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Let your rhymes and songs ring true!
Once, all were like you.

Posted by: MrBatman May 30 2003, 02:51 PM
[Blake]
Neko! Neko! burning bright
In the alley of the night,
What immortal seraphim
Could fume, inside thy fearful tum?
[/Blake]

Posted by: AncestralHamster May 31 2003, 03:35 AM
[!haiku] LOL! Bravo, MrBatman! [/!haiku]
CBongo:

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