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Posted by: Caduceuskun Mar 28 2003, 12:00 AM
Recharge and a bath
Piro's a tad slow tonight;
Yes, t3h 3vil indeed...

[irish haiku]
Taken by surprise on the phone
Piro's wishing he wasn't alone
He doesn't get a thing
Said by this friend of Ping;
But it's worse now that Largo is home!
[/irish haiku]

Yet another strip
Without Hayasaka-san
C-kun's sadness grows...

Posted by: AncestralHamster Mar 28 2003, 12:21 AM
"Can I call you back?"
But it's not Piro's cell phone.
Trouble foreshadowed.
Miho confuses Piro.
Her presence threatens Largo.
In reply to:

Yet another strip
Without Hayasaka-san
C-kun's sadness grows...

Have patience, C-kun.
What would Erika do?
Bear sorrow bravely.

Posted by: Shoka Mar 28 2003, 12:56 AM
In reply to:

Yet another strip
Without Hayasaka-san
C-kun's sadness grows...

That Ping needs to clean-up her person,
Could give rise to a staple diversion:
Let's get Erika, Kimiko,
And Yuki and Miho,
For an anime bath-house excursion!

and shoka quickly
drops out of sight, ph34ring now
reprisals from dom

Posted by: ashi Mar 28 2003, 01:41 AM
[irish haiku]
There's a knock: his attention's hijacked,
But he says she can call him right back.
She'll try to call Piro,
Be greeted by Miho,
And just what will she think about that?
[/irish haiku]

A cute EDS:
"Piro-san, will you bathe me?
My hair is stinky."


Turtle? Great Teacher?
From one point of view, they're just
A couple of drunks.

Posted by: Rowan Bristol Mar 28 2003, 04:00 AM
A whisp of shadow
Sweet teasing, pushing buttons
how nice; spotty tights

Posted by: squ33k Mar 28 2003, 07:54 AM
What's Piro thinking?
Duh! That is t3h 3v!7z phone!
How will Yuki call?

Yuki and Miho.
The foreshadowing hits you
square between the eyes.

Ping is all stinky.
Just too much for poor Piro.
Is Ping waterproof?

The l33t one cometh.
"We've had a defensive breach!"
Unfazed by t3h cute.

Posted by: ErekLich Mar 28 2003, 08:48 AM
Poor piro, he borrowed a cell
while poor Ping's energy level fell
Miho's control
is taking its toll
and I fear this will never end well...

Posted by: ashi Mar 28 2003, 02:50 PM
Captures the moment:
ErekLich's limmerick is
A delight to read

Posted by: Larom Mar 29 2003, 10:16 AM
I also will agree,
though poetry is beyond me.
Ereklich did well
rhyming with "-ell"
*His next one I wait to see. (*Her?)

Posted by: ErekLich Mar 29 2003, 11:07 AM
My attempts at Haiku did not fail!
although next to others they pale
I always did like
the Haiku open mic
And just for the record, I'm male.

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