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Posted by: CountAlpicola Mar 12 2003, 04:57 PM
I've been a little surprised with the lack of creative works resulting from this DPD so, in hopes of kicking something off, please allow me to present my first ever attempt at alliterative verse:

Ready to Play?

Resting at ready
with weapon in hand
Piroko prepares to play

She sits there silently
surveying the land
knowing there's nothing to say

Always alert and awaiting the call
ears and eyes for the enemy alone;
devils will die this day

Out on an ocean
the terror attacks
sending up spires of spray

Clean out the chambers!
Queue up the clips!
Cleverness guides the way

Tempting are townsfolk, frolicking free
inviting her to join in their jamboree.
But some missions sould never stray

Renewing her resolve she is
nimble and strong. She starts shooting;
firing into the fray.

Posted by: Shoka Mar 13 2003, 12:30 AM
Heh...cute set of verses, to match the comic...

ph34r the kut3 1s!

The girl kneels, half out of her suit,
And cradles a rocket launch tube;
You should not be deceived
By a frame that's petite,
For j00 must ph34r the 1s that r kut3!

Posted by: Caduceuskun Mar 13 2003, 01:34 AM
[irish haiku]
I must admit I do see the charm
In cute girls who'll do me great harm
But blowing me to pieces
That charm just decreases
I'd prefer that they just break my arm!
[/irish haiku]

Translation: Erika does more for my muse than Piroko. But I still wubs her. happy.gif Oh, and nice job, Count! Me likes.

Posted by: AncestralHamster Mar 14 2003, 12:57 AM
Not bad for a first work. Perhaps we shall see more of you in the haiku and verse threads from now on.

Posted by: Ultra Violet Mar 14 2003, 10:06 AM
Nice work

I am ready
The battle has begun
My hands are stedy
Time to have fun

Time to frag them all
The way is clear
Wach them fall
The enemy has f34r

This is my first atempt at poetry for many years

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