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Posted by: Shoka Feb 25 2003, 11:50 PM
a brief hiatus
for music criticicsm,
before the cascade.

at the very top
the rollercoaster pauses:

The typhoon hits with savage intention,
Then it falters with sly indirection:
You may feel safe and warm
At the eye of the storm,
'Til you're blitzed from the other direction!

Posted by: Caduceuskun Feb 25 2003, 11:59 PM
[many irish haiku]
We return to our good friend Ed,
Who's found a bag to cover his head,
His plans for poor Ping
Are sure going to sting,
But for which of them hasn't been said!

On one side a drawing so sweet,
That Kimiko's heart skips a beat,
But the writing on back
Will make Piro go "Ack!"
He'll already look like a cheat!

Elevator music around here
Is something that most people fear
"Fly Me to the Moon"
Would seem like a boon
Something that won't make us bleed out our ears!
[/many irish haiku]

Posted by: e-Monk Feb 26 2003, 12:03 AM
Fly me to the moon.
This is where my Sony Kill Stick
Achieves perfect aim.

[Irish Haiku]
No introduction is in place,
behind the bag lies a familiar face.
But if the little drawn eye
squints to aim at the AI,
It better be ready to be swamped with mace.

The bag-headed figure's returned.
He walks the scenes, but no head is turned,
'Cause they know that if they,
As much as a remark say,
The Kill-stick will have them torch-burnt.
[/Irish Haiku]

In reply to:

On one side a drawing so sweet,
That Kimiko's heart skips a beat,
But the writing on back
Will make Piro go "Ack!"
He'll already look like a cheat!

On the outside an expression so sweet,
That coincide with the musical beat.
But the writing on the case,
Will have all people race,
to avoid getting painfully hit.

Posted by: JB Feb 26 2003, 12:08 AM
Ed with a Killstick?
ACK! That can't be good at all.
Gameru: Ping's shield?

Posted by: kezia Feb 26 2003, 01:22 AM
what is behind art?
piro replies: nervous 'er?'
smiling kotone fade?

Posted by: BlckKnght Feb 26 2003, 01:34 AM
Brief ray of sunshine
Through grey winter overcast
Kimiko's warm smile

A sketch by Piro
A gift given as a gift
A note from Yuki

Ed may discover
Just how high turtles can fly
Over Tokyo

Posted by: JRandomLurker Feb 26 2003, 03:28 AM
teddy bear in shape
soft, comforting and wired
Yuki's Sandbenders

just being silly
a cool rant and a cool book
wai for Idoru!

Posted by: DrmBastich Feb 26 2003, 06:17 AM
Ed plus massive gun,
comes to kill sweet little Ping,
but ends up in Hell.

Piro and Kimiko?
God spare my funnybone pain,
I smell a dazed Piro.

Sony giveh Ed
an extremely massive gun,
Ping is so in doom.

[/irish haiku]
Sony gave Ed a killstick,
to wipe of that Ping-Chan bitch(gomen!)
but the shot missed,
and it flew to the tip
of where Ed is standing , he is picked.
(btw, picked is killed)
[/end irish haiku]

Posted by: Rowan Bristol Feb 26 2003, 09:02 AM
The moment before
all good things come to an end.

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